Ahem, here I go.
So, I already critiqued this, but not well. I’ll be critiquing the stickfigures, the description, and the critique.
In my critique, I said it was badly made, but never specified how, thus making anyone who cared to know what I meant figure it out, themselves. First of all, where his half cybernetic arm meets flesh, it’s very clearly a forced join, with no smothing, what so ever. This causes the elbow to move correctly, but outside the boundaries. That’s bad. Second, the full cybernetic arm is, more or less, A copy pase job, between the other hand, and pieces of the legs. It’s janky, and has too many sharp corners to call it good, or hell, even bad. This is just horrid. Next, the mask. The mask is the only part I detailed, and I did so, badly. It curves around his head, as though it’s a lot longer than it actually is, as well as being straight in a spot where that would damage the skin. Now, the legs aren’t very complainable, as this was made from a stick figure base, and the legs were only mildly modified.
The next thing in my critique was that the description sucked, but how so? First of all, I used it as a campaign to stop one use plastics, which isn’t fully bad. Even at the start of my desc I said “he is OP”, but that doesn’t quite justify this. Can run at MACH 7,937, or, in other words, 12% of MACH Jesus. A single punch can destroy anything known to man. This includes his cybernetics, because there’s no way those survive one of his punches. Also, on the subject of flawed science, the boosters in his feet have no stabilizers, and i’m sure everyone remembers the first time Tony tried to fly using just boot rockets. They say he felt the impact until the day he died.
And, finally, “Reeee”
I was not a small child making this. Enough said.