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    StickHelmetsubscriberocciferuc-winner-lvl3featured-lvl3master-noderuc-votercrusader 2022-07-25 02:58:46 UTC

    Testing this comic-ish thing for a website, I need tips.
    Here’s a small thing of what I’ve made, won’t be adding anything further since it’s suppose to be a example of whatever I’m trying to do with this comic.

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    • Thinner borders, also make them either deep black or bright white. No inbetween, or else it usually turns out wonky. Also, make the colors pop more, they blend in with eachother and it’s not very eye-catching. Lastly, framing of each scene could be better. Overall, you’ve got the concept down. Keep at it.

      2022-07-25 03:16:26 UTC 3
      • Replying to: teo diggity danThinner borders, also make them either deep black or bright

        Basically what Teo said. Lots of potential! Looking forward to seeing it.

        2022-07-25 03:21:14 UTC 3
      • Replying to: teo diggity danThinner borders, also make them either deep black or bright

        Oh yeah this is it, although some is “confusing” for me so i hope you don’t mind me @ing you to make a quick checkup on what I’ve done right and done wrong.

        2022-07-25 05:52:37 UTC 1
    • Cool. Maybe since it’s a comic it doesn’t have to look like an animation, you could edit it in snapseed to look more comic-booky or something.

      2022-07-25 03:46:18 UTC 2