i really liked the bit where he put on the suit lol, that was actually pretty well done
biggest critique is, and i know you’re going for a more cinematic effect with this, it starts WAY too slow
that type of very slow buildup with just text and camera panning does not work for stickfigure animations on youtube where your audience has the attention span of an acorn, get to it right away, bonus points for starting immediately with action and then cutting back to some plot development
2019-11-19 10:37:42 UTC 
i really liked the bit where he put on the suit lol, that was actually pretty well done
biggest critique is, and i know you’re going for a more cinematic effect with this, it starts WAY too slow
that type of very slow buildup with just text and camera panning does not work for stickfigure animations on youtube where your audience has the attention span of an acorn, get to it right away, bonus points for starting immediately with action and then cutting back to some plot development
Ok boomer
Just kidding, thanks for the criticism
Fun fact, the intro sequence was originally 17 seconds but I stretched it to 2 mins by superior editing