I really like the part that actually had visulas from the game.
As far as story goes, I give it a 4/5. It said “1 hour earler”, that was when white was thrown off, right? That doesn’t make any sense, but other than that it was not bad.
As far as humor goes, the only part I laughed at was at the end when white was hit by an astroid.
i keep loling at the thumbnail
I really like the part that actually had visulas from the game.
As far as story goes, I give it a 4/5. It said “1 hour earler”, that was when white was thrown off, right? That doesn’t make any sense, but other than that it was not bad.
As far as humor goes, the only part I laughed at was at the end when white was hit by an astroid.
great job!!!
> the only part I laughed at was at the end when white was hit by an astroid
I laughed that you laughed at that
why would that be funny?
This is nice my guy
lol.
Number 5 burger king foot lettuce
I love it
Bethany
I love it!