Story and humor are inapplicable to this animation, so I won’t critique them.
This is another example of Vamrack’s improvement, but it is also a fight animation so I will critique it as such. The fight is fairly decent, but it lacks quite a bit in order to cement itself as something unique or of high quality. Movements are crisply animated and well done, but punches and attacks often blend into each other, which can oftentimes make the animation stale and seem without substance. The beginning with the guns was pretty well done as well, and the x-ray attacks are nice touches. This animation does the basics decently, but it needs to focus on expanding the creativity of the fight and take more risks rather than showcase the same-looking punches one after the other. It’s a decent and enjoyable fight, but it still lacks the aspects required for it to be considered good.
Very entertaining. The brutality shown and all the different attacks are very satisfying. The music suprisingly works well with the fight is the suspense is done well. Visually theres just something off in this. Maybe it’s the quality it was exported in or something else. Theres a big fight that was implied before the animation took place which is a cool touch but it would have been much better near the start. Visually theres quite a lot of inconsistencies. Animation wise, this captures a pretty good style and solidifies it.
Low 4/5
Sexy sonnava-bish
Story and humor are inapplicable to this animation, so I won’t critique them.
This is another example of Vamrack’s improvement, but it is also a fight animation so I will critique it as such. The fight is fairly decent, but it lacks quite a bit in order to cement itself as something unique or of high quality. Movements are crisply animated and well done, but punches and attacks often blend into each other, which can oftentimes make the animation stale and seem without substance. The beginning with the guns was pretty well done as well, and the x-ray attacks are nice touches. This animation does the basics decently, but it needs to focus on expanding the creativity of the fight and take more risks rather than showcase the same-looking punches one after the other. It’s a decent and enjoyable fight, but it still lacks the aspects required for it to be considered good.
High 2/5.
PL Team Slave OwnerVery entertaining. The brutality shown and all the different attacks are very satisfying. The music suprisingly works well with the fight is the suspense is done well. Visually theres just something off in this. Maybe it’s the quality it was exported in or something else. Theres a big fight that was implied before the animation took place which is a cool touch but it would have been much better near the start. Visually theres quite a lot of inconsistencies. Animation wise, this captures a pretty good style and solidifies it.
Low 4/5