Story is inapplicable to this animation, so I won’t critique it.
This is an animation parody of an already existing comedy skit. The skit itself is pretty funny, and the overall animation is fairly decent at expressing that comedy. However, instead of taking the source material and playing around with that, creating funnier scenes and expressions, the animation takes a basic route just by depicting these characters normally. It’s more a self-insert to a funny comedic skit rather than taking the skit and making something new with it, which is a shame. This animation is decent and funny, but it doesn’t provide much else in variety or uniqueness, and you are better off watching the source material.
Congrats, this didn’t end up being the cringe I thought it would be. It was clear of cringe. Though in terms of actual critiquing, this animation doesn’t quite hold much purpose over just watching the original video this came from. But it’s nice to see how this is executed with good posing and a simple style of animation and visuals.
2/5
Story is inapplicable to this animation, so I won’t critique it.
This is an animation parody of an already existing comedy skit. The skit itself is pretty funny, and the overall animation is fairly decent at expressing that comedy. However, instead of taking the source material and playing around with that, creating funnier scenes and expressions, the animation takes a basic route just by depicting these characters normally. It’s more a self-insert to a funny comedic skit rather than taking the skit and making something new with it, which is a shame. This animation is decent and funny, but it doesn’t provide much else in variety or uniqueness, and you are better off watching the source material.
2/5.
PL Team Slave OwnerCongrats, this didn’t end up being the cringe I thought it would be. It was clear of cringe. Though in terms of actual critiquing, this animation doesn’t quite hold much purpose over just watching the original video this came from. But it’s nice to see how this is executed with good posing and a simple style of animation and visuals.
2/5