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Dev Swizzy
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Bro this was good ash the story and then the fights didn’t make it weird everything was perfect and then the nighttime city vibes was so on point add some pc editing or wtvr and this would be 10/5 and it’s already 5/5 good job

gneppo
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Well, I’ll just keep this short. The animation is good. Basic story, easy to follow, one or two grammar errors(doesn’t matter, though), and good fight scenes. There is occasional choppiness and overuse of blur(ow ow my eyes) but the animation is good when it counts. 4.3/10. (:D)))-<—–<

Toxic911 Animations
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Toxic911 Animations“S e r i e s R e v i e w”

Story and humor are inapplicable to this animation, so I won’t critique them.

The sword is Frostmourne lol

Overall, this fight is quite decent, but it suffers from a lot of the consistent flaws Braker demonstrates through his fights. The animation quality and effects are very well-done, but the fight often depicts “fight for a second, talk for an hour” scenes. The dialogue is very prevalent through the fight, which is a considerable con since the dialogue itself is poorly done. However, these cons are honestly acceptable considering the overall quality of the rest of the work. Yes, the cons of the bad pacing and overall dialogue negatively affect the animation, but the angles, animation, and fighting itself are so well done that they mainly cancel each other out to create a well-done fight.

TL;DR: The fight is great, but the pacing and dialogue aren’t. It’s enjoyable but could use a lot more work done. Still, it stands well as a great fight.

3/5.

Explosive Bullet
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First off, those visuals were pretty good. While they were great, they ended up inconsistent and disappeared throughout the fight. Though I will give credit for you sticking to that city setting for the most part. The effects were very good for the most part. But I gotta take into consideration that they were stylized here rather than made to be realistic. Story that was in this is a nice addition, but it wasn’t done that well. It constantly interupts the fight and forces you to pause and the dialogue delivered isn’t even that great. But overally this is pretty impressive. I really wanted to give it 4 stars, but I couldn’t justify it.
High 3/5