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Cheese Biscuit
2022-10-02 14:43:08 UTC Something still looks wrong, and I can’t tell what
Someone help like actually take a minute of your life to say something because I can’t tell if it’s me or if there’s something off about the head and how it plays with the rest of the body. Like I really don’t understand, do people not like giving criticism? Or is there nothing wrong, in which case just say no? Or do people not even read this and look at the image and go “huh” and ignore it? Help lmao I’m dying over here
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If I were to do anything it would be to bring the jawline thing back a little and maybe since the head is bigger adjust the placement of the eyes and mouth
Back how?
I dunno, it just seems a little jagged, and blends into the face weird
who in their right mind would want help of any kind from me
I only use the left side of my mind
The torso could be bigger, it’s hard to get right and even my own work isn’t quite there yet but as a general term of reference making the arms half or just over half the size of the torso by width could make a difference.
The only problem at that point is you’d be working with a 4 / 5 view which means animating run cycles etc can look weird.
back of the head goes too far out
first impression that popped in my head, the eyes look generic and just blah compared to the style of everything else (which all flows well)
its just the eyes
i’d have to do trial and error, but i’d say make them bigger and really have his emotion shown through them, more defined iris vs pupil w/ some shine