I’m really confused, please add better pacing, dialogue and explanation so we know what’s actually happening
Also you used that explosion movieclip you got off youtube a lot, don’t do the same thing so frequently
Other than that you have a good concept for a show but not great execution, I recommend getting help and this’ll have a lotta potential
It’s like a blink and miss an entire piece of plot.
1. Make it slower, pace it correctly, rushing in no matter the excuse will just make your series unwatchable and unmemorable
2. Don’t use other people’s OC’s, it’s best you make your own stuff when possible.
3. Don’t take to things lightly like ‘oh hey off I go to to kill people taking their lives permanently likely affecting their friends and family dearly just for some quick cash’, adding sincerity with your characters is best otherwise it seems too casual.
That’s about it, aside from the small in-betweens of the animating could be better etc, that’s all.
I’m really confused, please add better pacing, dialogue and explanation so we know what’s actually happening
Also you used that explosion movieclip you got off youtube a lot, don’t do the same thing so frequently
Other than that you have a good concept for a show but not great execution, I recommend getting help and this’ll have a lotta potential
Okay sorry for the pacing and I am really tired so I didn’t
Want to change the sounds but thank you for the feedback
You help me out a lot
It’s like a blink and miss an entire piece of plot.
1. Make it slower, pace it correctly, rushing in no matter the excuse will just make your series unwatchable and unmemorable
2. Don’t use other people’s OC’s, it’s best you make your own stuff when possible.
3. Don’t take to things lightly like ‘oh hey off I go to to kill people taking their lives permanently likely affecting their friends and family dearly just for some quick cash’, adding sincerity with your characters is best otherwise it seems too casual.
That’s about it, aside from the small in-betweens of the animating could be better etc, that’s all.
Thanks 🙏 man you help me be better and I appreciate that