This isn’t bad, pretty decent little anim.

Pros:
Animation was pretty good. The tween was a little heavy, but overall pleasing to the eye. (I think you could probably ease up the drops on the swinging, it looks stiff at times.) I enjoyed this small glimpse of what might come for this show. I also thought the figs for the people were well-made and nice.

Cons:
For a first episode, I recommend you don’t rush it. It seemed like you kind of half-assed some of the animation in it, as well as just skipped some stuff (“eventually peter arrives to school on time”). It also seemed like you didn’t really have a script or any idea for a flowing story here. When you make a first episode, you’re trying to grab the attention of the watcher and leave them hooked. You didn’t really introduce us to the characters or their lives, and didn’t give much insight on the world around them and the personalities they have. Though I realize animation and storybuilding are very hard, it’s worth it to make a good first episode for a series. Also, you could use some stickfigure backgrounds in these scenes, the low-res google images don’t work very well.

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Overall: 6.5/10
Aight animation, but I didn’t get much information from the episode.

(Note: You don’t have to take my critique seriously, in the end what you do is all up to you!)

all right, first of all, it’s not bad, but it brought me to sleep.

x was too heavy. if you haven’t done this seriously, it would be superfluous for me to criticize.

but if you did it carefully:
the writing is very tiring
the swinging scene is slow
and a little boring too

my advice:
you shouldn’t use tween
fps is too slow 30 40 fps would be nice
learn how to use the camera

incredible

also was that a brawlhalla orion sound

sus

Ralph doesn’t even have discord