no

much better, only minor thing I notice is a little feet-sliding but I think you meant it to be still just didn’t focus on keeping the feet pixel-perfect

not bad movements

top one I’m sure you can see just seems off

realistically his front foot should have been extended before it was, as he was throwing his weight forward

also realistically, a follow-through to that throw where the back foot comes to the front as he slows down the momentum and stands back up (after throwing) is needed