pretty cool.
however,

the neck should definitely be longer.

if you’re gonna add outlines you may aswell just add outlines to the entire figure, since it’s helps show that some parts are overlapping eachother. as opposed to like, leaving gaps in the outlines and not being able to make out the shapes of some parts because they’re just gray silhouettes. (I ALSO CAN’T TELL HOW BIG THE BOOBS ARE ON THE FULL VERSION AGSGZGZHZH)

smallest nitpick in my entire life, but you could add abit of a curve between the neck and the shoulders. instead of having the shoulders be completely flat.

the arms are too long. the wrists are usually meant to end around the crotch area, not around the thighs.

torso could be a tad bit thicker.