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    Killua 2020-06-20 18:07:10 UTC

    Mohammed ali
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    rocky balboa

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    • I kinda like your style, it needs improvement, but the hits really seemed powerful because you (somewhat) animated the full punches, the sounds, shaking, and that video-game-fighter-like “pause” on big hits while the screen shakes

      its smooth too

      now, to improve, you should focus on keeping the bodies acting and looking like real life

      meaning, feet placement, that’s for one – they’re all over the place, they don’t seem to be standing or running but rather floating

      imagine yourself actining out an action before you animate it, notice how your foot is placed, how your weight shifts, how you build up / anticipation for a punch (arm back, lean back, pause…then swing forward at high speed) – all of this should appear in your frames

      don’t just simply move pose-to-pose, rather, animated how the people move from pose-to-pose

      example, jumping, what you’re missing mainly is that “anticipation” phase

      2020-06-20 18:47:42 UTC 7
    • The camera shakes a bit too much. But still very nice

      2020-06-20 19:17:07 UTC 1
      • Replying to: Ayaan (⛒ ͜ ⛒)The camera shakes a bit too much. But still very nice

        Thank you

        2020-06-20 22:54:38 UTC 0