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    Kingston 💚subscriberocciferuc-winner-lvl3pro-noder 2021-07-20 11:17:52 UTC

    This is Connor Campbell. He is a curious 17 year old college student who is an engineer and a chemist. He lives in the year 2169. He loves playing video games, and creating gadgets. He had a pretty normal life, that is until October 15th where his life was changed forever. He was on a science tour at Mergus Robotics. He snuck off and went into a secret lab. There he saw a serum that was extracted from a spider labled TR-987. He was curious and wanted to see what it feels like. He didnt know even the tiniest physical contact would give him the full effects. It left a permanent burn on his right index finger. But little did he know that serum was being used to make an army of spider powered robots to slaughter the city..

    P.S. this is just a recolor of nickys fig so dont expect it on the site

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    • That origin story sounds almost identical to normal Spider-man’s.

      Try something unique.

      2021-07-20 11:38:04 UTC 1
      • Replying to: Tastylemon16That origin story sounds almost identical to normal Spider-m

        im trying but i dont have a good story telling brain
        besides does it even matter if the story is similar?

        2021-07-20 11:39:25 UTC 0
        • Replying to: Kingston 💚im trying but i dont have a good story telling brain besides

          It does because there are countless fan spider-man stories, animations etc. with the same premise and origin.

          2021-07-20 12:00:43 UTC 0
          • Replying to: Tastylemon16It does because there are countless fan spider-man stories,

            the only spiderman fan films i see (just stick nodes ones) is 3. but i may just be blind, but if i am, imma just list the differences
            hes not peter parker
            he uses nanotech
            instead of the sinister six, he has the sinister seven
            he lives with his parents
            he lives in and alternate universe
            he uses potions
            he dosent have a red/blue suit
            instead of oscorp, its mergus robotics
            he lives in the future
            he didnt get his powers by getting bitten by a spider
            but if thats still “the same” then idk what to do

            2021-07-20 12:10:11 UTC 0
            • Replying to: Kingston 💚the only spiderman fan films i see (just stick nodes ones) i

              It comes pretty close, adding one difference in quantity or input towards getting an output doesn’t make it different.

              Sinister six is still the same premise, bad guys bundle up to get spider-man.

              I could list more but I don’t care that much, I’m just pointing out that you should be wary how much you keep to source material and how different you can make it.

              Add some tragedy maybe or Spider-man has to be spider-man due to certain conditions rather than ‘haha spider cool, uncle dead’.

              2021-07-20 12:16:32 UTC 0
              • Replying to: Tastylemon16It comes pretty close, adding one difference in quantity or

                i was planning on doing that

                2021-07-20 12:25:41 UTC 0
                • Replying to: Kingston 💚i was planning on doing that

                  Tbh I like the new stuff like the nanobots but some of the “minor” changes seem kinda silly. Like Sinister Six into Sinister Seven, there’s not that much of a difference. But I still like the futuristic feel so doesn’t matter.

                  2021-07-20 12:31:14 UTC 1
                  • Replying to: TempestOrRaiderTbh I like the new stuff like the nanobots but some of the “

                    thanks
                    but with the sin 7, i have the entire fight scene planned but it will only work with that exact amount

                    2021-07-20 12:44:39 UTC 0