It’s way too small, the artist just needs to work of his(or her) proportions. Other than that, it’s good art.

aside from the annoying anime girl pic all i can say is her pose is fairly natural, maybe the arm is just a bit too skinny imo hell, even i can do the arms positioning irl but yet again

(im probably the next stretch armstrong irl)

I saw the photo and started reading , was scared you were gonna disappoint us