Replying to: SillyDamonRosé(🟣🔪🐻🐥🦊🐰)Imma have a look at it and see it fully On first glance wat

So after seeing it, not watching the extremely long unnecessary parts and only important stuff in the story I gotta say that initially it looked promising but it started going downhill a bit.

At the start, I was pretty much amazed with the choice of songs, both for the dinosaurs showcase and the school intro.

Though I quickly found out that the animation would be inconsistent, since at times there would even be a kinemaster watermark for no reason…

The story it self lacks a bit, it’s mostly just hunt n kill, the characters have the strongest plot armor I have ever seen in my life. Why would a Dino lick a kid before eating them?

The choice of words + humor sometimes looks like it was made by a <13.
Which in some cases can be good as they fit the characters, tho I am not buying that 2 kids manage to escape Dinos easily when the others got beheaded and mauled within seconds.

The music is used very often and it’s loud. Often used to mask the fact that there’s not much of SFX.

The stuff that happens within the movie too is pretty cliche.

The dinasour appearing at the beach was wild.

At times, the characters move really unrealistic as if they were drunk when talking or just sit still. Sometimes they have weird articulations, such as a really begginerish walk cycle, weird running animations, etc…

I understand that there was more than 1 person involved in this. But for further reference it is needed to acknowledge that more people doesn’t necessarily mean better for projects such as this.

Out of nowhere, the scenes got better lighting / SFX for no reason at all. That makes the animation look bad through the rest of the film as it doesn’t meet that quality standard.

The subtitles are awkwardly placed, and I won’t lie, that could’ve been an easy fix.

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Tho this doesn’t mean it’s all bad, of course not!

This is the longest Sticknodes film I’ve seen on my 8 years in this platform. It looks good as a whole with its issues, it was 3 years well spent.

I hope Ralph promotes it a lot since it truly does seem interesting and entertaining for the most part.

Sometimes it can be funny too, seeing the little stick figures meet and bond was a warming sight.

I like the idea, plenty. But it needs more work on cooperation with the rest of the team.
Don’t try to make the animation long and the story lacked.

Make it nice and short, enjoyable and entertaining.

Very good stuff for a first movie. You’ve got my congratulations.

7.5/10

Replying to: MaybesubYou are the reason it was delayed for over a year

Nuh uh