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Donโt really know how else to start this so if you have watched my film (or if you havenโt thereโs a link right there) tell my any critiques or issues you have. Iโm trying to know what I need to improve for a sequel. But also tell me what you liked and what not. And if you havenโt watched it give it a watch and tell me what you think after. It is a pretty long watch so be warned lol


There are a few issues Iโm already aware of as well. Like bad dialogue. Since I started this when I was 11 I also didnโt have a script. And now Iโm 14 about to turn 15. So even some of the newer scenes may have crappy dialogue because Iโm still a silly little guy. Along with that inconsistent animation at times with multiple animators and at times I just got lazy. Also aware of poor pacing and etc. I really want to improve for a sequel of any other projects I want to do.
Thanks for listening to my yap
Me when my post doesnโt get 1000 likes in 20 minutes: 🤬
Too real