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    Maybesubsubscriberoccifer 2024-03-30 18:39:45 UTC

    Donโ€™t really know how else to start this so if you have watched my film (or if you havenโ€™t thereโ€™s a link right there) tell my any critiques or issues you have. Iโ€™m trying to know what I need to improve for a sequel. But also tell me what you liked and what not. And if you havenโ€™t watched it give it a watch and tell me what you think after. It is a pretty long watch so be warned lol

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    • There are a few issues Iโ€™m already aware of as well. Like bad dialogue. Since I started this when I was 11 I also didnโ€™t have a script. And now Iโ€™m 14 about to turn 15. So even some of the newer scenes may have crappy dialogue because Iโ€™m still a silly little guy. Along with that inconsistent animation at times with multiple animators and at times I just got lazy. Also aware of poor pacing and etc. I really want to improve for a sequel of any other projects I want to do.
      Thanks for listening to my yap

      2024-03-30 18:45:33 UTC 4
      • Replying to: MaybesubThere are a few issues Iโ€™m already aware of as well. Like ba

        Me when my post doesnโ€™t get 1000 likes in 20 minutes: 🤬

        2024-03-30 19:53:49 UTC 1