Honest criticism go!

1. Too choppy
2. Weird usage of tween
3. Not much detail
4. Boring camera angles
5. Looks unrealistic like there is no physics there.

How to improve go!

1. Keep practicing by doing physics tests, like when running, you start slow and than go fast, there is a gradual incline and decline in speed.
2. Keep trying to work with tween maybe increasing the frame rate.
3. Use a few gradients but not aguy amount of detailing.
4. Move the camera around and try to make one of the stickfigures the center of attention maybe.
5. Practice different physics tests, watch science videos if you have to, and try replicating the physics from some of the test.

Overall:

4/10

I understand you may still be new to this sort of things with physics and tween and camera angles, so don’t take it too personally and good luck! 👍

I know he will.