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    Melon Lordsubscriberuc-winner-lvl3pro-noderfeatured-lvl2 2019-02-27 05:48:50 UTC

    This will probable be my last variation of my character. But Iโ€™m still open to advice!

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    • aaaaaaaaand oh jeez it needs to die. now. sorry
      criticism: what is that thing on his wrist? some sort of metal thumb? why is he wrapped up like some sortof edgy dude who caught the plague? IS THAT A SCYTHE AND WHERE IS HIS OTHER EYE
      advice: get rid of the scythe, they are impractical and almost useless. add more detail to the character’s legs and just overall body, like clothing or something. i dont m things being edgy, but if they are tooo edgy, they must die. so show the other eye along with some skin on the head.

      2019-02-27 06:22:10 UTC 0
    • Why the stomach and not chest?
      Without the chain itโ€™s a scythe.
      Maybe have something on both arms and lower legs?

      2019-02-27 06:40:51 UTC 0
    • This gives me ideas of a character
      A stickfigure made of chains and spikes as heads, would be bizarre as hell

      2019-02-27 06:48:01 UTC 2
    • Yo that actually dope af
      The only advice I have is to maybe give him another shackle somewhere

      2019-02-27 11:48:03 UTC 0
    • Character looks good mate! Iโ€™d recommend maybe moving the bandage on the stomach higher a bit and making the broken shackle a bit more obvious by increasing the size of the broken chains or somethin.

      2019-02-27 11:58:28 UTC 0
      • Replying to: Toxic911 AnimationsCharacter looks good mate! Iโ€™d recommend maybe moving the ba

        Hi! If you could make it so I could edit the ZBrawler that would be great! And how do I send it to you, should I use email?

        2019-02-28 01:12:20 UTC 0
    • Make the weapon a ice pick (if your still listening)

      2019-02-27 20:37:57 UTC 0
      • Replying to: Freddy FazbearMake the weapon a ice pick (if your still listening)

        I am and… nah. I like the idea of a scythe.

        2019-02-27 22:49:36 UTC 0