took about a minute before things started popping off, before that it was very boring
which i say as my main point of criticism for a lot of ppl, look at any tv show or movie and how they catch your attention at the very start, then they get into dialogue and characters and plot
(also, the lack of background noise/music doesn’t help, I only say this since it’s obvious you’re capable of doing editing afterwards with sounds etc because of all the good war/voice sounds afterward, just need to add some bg music as well to give proper atmosphere and cinematic feel)
its actually overall a very unique video, lots happening but at a slow-ish pace which you may want to pick up in future vids
less b-roll shots for example and less time spent on slow scenes – still have them, but cut some of it out or speed it up a bit
i know you’re trying to build an atmosphere but you need to also remember your audience, find that balance
took about a minute before things started popping off, before that it was very boring
which i say as my main point of criticism for a lot of ppl, look at any tv show or movie and how they catch your attention at the very start, then they get into dialogue and characters and plot
(also, the lack of background noise/music doesn’t help, I only say this since it’s obvious you’re capable of doing editing afterwards with sounds etc because of all the good war/voice sounds afterward, just need to add some bg music as well to give proper atmosphere and cinematic feel)
its actually overall a very unique video, lots happening but at a slow-ish pace which you may want to pick up in future vids
less b-roll shots for example and less time spent on slow scenes – still have them, but cut some of it out or speed it up a bit
i know you’re trying to build an atmosphere but you need to also remember your audience, find that balance
Noted, gonna cut off some of that, thanks for the tips Ralph-sama.