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New Hero forge OC.
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Omegaruis The dark hero of Hell He is like a down to earth blitzø But actually doesn’t joke. He is hired by people in Hell to assassinate people in the living realm he is one of the strongest demons in hell. He also kills high profile targets in hell such as overlords and one time satan himself but of course failed against the fallen angel. Lucifer gave him a chance as his personal assassin. He Agreed to his offer working for him he was sent to kill the angels that wronged him. One time people actually spotted him and had video evidence of the incident. The military was sent to attack and capture Omegaruis. The military had established their defensive positions waiting for Omegaruis. Omegaruis Being cocky as fuck charged the military head on killing over 100 men. He then opened a portal to hell returning to the land of the damned. Staddes is Omegaruis’s trusty dog they both died at the same time in the living realm they found each other in hell.





1. If he is assigned to kill people / demons in hell as well as on the plane of the living where are they going to go? They’re already in hell.
2. Lucifer is the devil / satan so why would he hire the guy who tried to kill him, what sense does that make?
3. The military likely wouldn’t follow a being for hell based off of a little evidence of an event that likely wouldn’t have occurred on the living plane anyway since angels are typically in heaven..
4. Why would this guy leave after killing military men as well as open a portal to hell likely leaving a viable way to access hell / know where he goes for the people on the living plane.
The character looks alright but is sort of a phantom rider ripoff. It’s okay but there is definitely more that can be done to enhance the character, at least for story.
They’re already in hell.
Then they’ll go to somewhere worse
They’ll get sent to Sticknodes.com
It’s called dark magic lol am not good at lore making
That’s okay, hopefully you can improve.
All the best