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@goofygrape69
As I make the cameras show static I move to my chosen place the guard confused does not understand this trace. He checks the other camera as I move to the closet spot my purple fur showing through the dark once a place of joy now a place of misery the guard sees me close he panics as he shuts the door I play a string as it sends a shiver down his spine I move away so he may reopen his door and I may have another chance I hear the door open as I move in front of foxy’s cove I then spring into action as I finally enter the office chica is on the other side staring with menace, I hear Freddy’s endo turning and rusting as he walks off the stage the fear of the guard is a face I haven’t seen in a long time, I get closer the guard looking for a way to get out of this enteral suffering as he begs for his life I move a step closer, Freddy has arrived the dust coming off him as he sings his death song the sounds of Har har har echo through the halls as foxy is singing his tune as he runs down the hall dum dum dum dum it echo’s through these old halls as the power goes out as I finally take my step to him for a moment I see a golden bear and then he disappears I finally do it I lunge at him breaking his arms the pain echos through these old halls that used to echo laughter I drag him away so that he may join are merry band I can’t help but play some strings as this only happens rarely I stuff him inside the bear so that one day he can do the same as I did today so he may claim revenge as I did.



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Awesome I’m working on a stick nodes themed meal will release recipe when finished
Lmao I have an idea for breakfast
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I’m listening
“Default pancakes”
Pancakes in the shape of a default with red grey and tan syrup
“Manny eggs”
Eggs made into a shape of fedora.
“Fedora’s special hash browns”
Hash brown with green and red peppers with your choice of ketchup or hot sauce!
Drink: “Tastylemon’s Classic Lemonade!”
Classic lemonade with some blue syrup and hit lemon flavored ice of that extra flavor!
And lastly the!
“Goofy grapes”
These grapes have been made sure to taste super sweet and not as juicy so it doesn’t taste super bad!
Also I’d be happy if you rate both my story and this breakfast idea you made and I hope you add this to your breakfast idea
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Your story is a 9/10 it had a few errors in the wording
I don’t like eggs
They scare me
No
woah

anyways this is bad you should be banned from writing anything ever again
One Step Closer reference?!?!?!
golden bear
You know periods are a thing, right?
i can write better i will literally write a story so much shorter than this about a photo on my phone and it will be so much better than you can ever be
you say that like being better than this is a particularly tough feat. it’s not. there are wattpad icarly fanfictions better penned than this drivel. i could give a pen and paper to the local alleyway crackhead and he’d probably come up with something higher quality.
i dont write thats why i said that
i dont write and i can still be better than this
point still stands
It’s not supposed to be good I’m supposed to learn better from this constructive criticism
you can start by adding . and ! and ?
and also implementing coherence. that helps.