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@scorchingscorpio
Since your the main dbz/dbs Guy here are my concept characters
Max
Race saiyan (not I know there is a lot but donât click off or get your pitchfork yet)
Cannot go ssj or ssg at all only power up is kaioken (for non followers this is also called king kai fist)
Normal kaioken boost is kaioken x100
If that doesnât work x10000
If that still doesnât work he just goes strait up x1mil
If that somehow still doesnât work he goes xâ
Note: itâs not actually infinite but the maximum he can go without being ripped to shreds
Now here is the kicker kaioken is one of the only two things of ki he can control properly other being Kamehameha
Base strength is ubsurd being goku ssj2
Max MUCH LATER found out he can go lssj3 and 4 but it drives him berserkLord Zero
Race Friezan
While not being as powerful as goku or Frieza himself he is still a capable fighter
His design doesnât have the purple part on the head like Frieza dose but instaed horns going back
He is an expert in ki control and is constantly in final form but when he dose need strength he transfers all ki turning his âskinâ from ice blue to whiter than Frieza
He hates both goku and FriezaDestroy
Race namekian
But bulkier than piccolo and wields an axe
He is red and black and is normally in giant namekian form
He prefers melee moves and when he dose use ki moves it is usually countering large ki attack with a modified special beam cannonDare
Race majin
She is dating zero but he will never openly admit it
She can use a special technique that turns her into female buff buu with four arms
She has all of kid buuâs techniques and abilities but often refraines from using a lot of themEdward
Race human
He is a human who can fight beerus when he is using 70% power but Edward is roshi old and is teaching warriorsAndroid 38 (James)
A male android who can produce genki (life energy if I got the lore right) and produces so much he and whoever is within 10 feet of him become immortal and almost invincible
Other than that he canât fight



“If that somehow still doesnât work he goes xâ”
get out
I made a not that is not actually infinity
okay
“If that still doesnât work he just goes strait up x1mil”
get out again
He has trained himself for that strain since until 50 years after my main story for him he canât go lssj
Plus he has more muscle mass than broly
Bro, sorry for the delay. But give me 2 more hours. The girlfriendâs over ☺️
Ok judge when you can and good luck
Because your a nice person?
Trust me compared to epitaph your nice
Because he has become to popular and arrogant I personally wish to strike that down rise above him and let him start over so he can learn humility
Want to join me on my heroic quest?
So first things first
1 what is your rhg full body
2 are you in either inomorta or the Ramox series
And 3 are you on ok terms with bootleg snake
1 ok
2 welcome
3 only for the Ramox series because of the theme
I really like this. But since you went to review them and help you I shall do so.
First off, Max,
I making a start out character with no transformations was pretty fair. But then I saw the kaioken parts. Iâm going to be straight up with you. Itâs kinda off a jack off saying can go kaioken X10000, 1,000,000, and infinity. I could understand the X100. But the others was just jumping way over the line. Just to remember you, you need perfect ki control to pull that off and on top of that is incredibly difficult to keep the body in check and controlling that much energy in a sayian body is insanely difficult. Letâs say he pulled x10000 kaioken off. He would be able to hold it for 10 seconds before he feels fatigued and unable to move. Because having that much energy flowing through you while fighting is just impossible. So instead of the kaioken just have your character have a false ssj like in the lord slug movie and have the kaioken be a side thing. Also, if you can try to give his and all his attacks there own name. Thus, it feels less artificial. Also if I was to scale him, I would say he is as strong as ssj future trunks after coming out the time chamber. Also, if has more muscle mass than broly, then the draw back would be that even though he is 8x stronger, his speed plummets. So in other words, he would barely be able to hit anyone. Instead of him going off the rails crazy. Just make buffer and stay aware, the draw back for him would be he gets super cocky.
Now lord zero, he sounds pretty cool, the ice armor thing is a good touch. I had no problem except for 2 things. Right off the bat I donât really like the name. It feels generic. It sounds more like a failed sonic OC. I would suggest Lord Frostbite or Shivera or something like that. Because zero doesnât feel Acrosian.(That is what the frieza race is called, not friezan) Also, why does he hate frieza and Goku? I would understand if he hated one or the other, but both? I would understand if hated frieza because frieza is just a terrible guy. Or Goku because he killed his fellow acrosian. But both doesnât make sense. I would suggest he be around second form frieza to captain Ginyu level. Somewhere in between.
Now for destroy, I really like him. I really like the fact that he wields an axe and prefers melee. But what is kinda odds is that is always in gaint namekian form. Itâs doesnât make any sense why you want to waste energy to be in that form just casually. I would understand if he was just a tall dude, like 8.5 feet. Also, if anyone is going to have a berserker form, itâs him. Other than that, he is cool. I would suggest he be around if you add both burter and recoome together, you would get destroy.
Now for Dare, I see date as being this overly active, feisty and thrill seeking Majin. Also, if anything, if you really want to ship Dare and Zero. Then, make her constantly hit off on him but gets turn down just as often. Kinda like Vegeta with bulma. But he still feels something for her. Donât make her go buff. If anything, just give her have the 4 arm thing that tien has and instead of buff just make her go like if she starts out as kid buu size but then transforms to Super Buu size. Other than that no problems. I would say she should be around..Full power frieza level…but she hides it for Zeros sack.
Now Edward,
He is a human, ok, he fought beerus at 70% power……WAIT?! Now that is over the top. Maybe later on he gets tired of being the weakest member and gets greedy and wishes himself to be that strong but just starting out like that is just…NO. In terms of power, he should be around cell saga yamcha level. Also, just make him around 50 years old. Other than that, no problems
Finally the android, you made him a walking target when you said he make others stronger within 10 feet of him. If anything, if my RHG had prop time. He would own your team because of him. If anything just make it so. He is an android designed to spend life and gather information to store with his ever growing intelligence. He is the science/inventor/intel guy of the bunch. I would suggest he be about. Nappa level…because he doesnât fight.
And thatâs just my silly opinion. Also Change some of their names.
Sorry some details I didn’t explain
Destroy is usually in giant namekian to train he is used to that forms strain
Max I understand
Lord zero can’t surpass goku witch pissed him off very much
Edward is a templar and is achient with 9 pages of lore but he rarely fights
For zero I can’t think of a better ice and that fits him also here is where I scale my characters
Max base strength =goku ssj2
Zero base=frieza final form(not full of the power)
Dare in between cell and kid buu
Edward: fluctuation (i’ll explain later because of time)
Destroy = goku ssj
for the android I guess kappa alpha then
Classification 2 lord zero when using his transfer power increase strength and defense
I scale and developed these characters for super stuff so to survive goku and vegeta they also have to be extremely strong
Your trying to jump and not crawl.
Try to keep them on the low for now.
Ok
Btw do you know any good muscle figs I should use for destroy op and max
Well…..I have some. But I well leave. The coming of a villain to you
So you don’t want to send them,?
No.