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Ramoxfire V2
2018-10-04 18:02:20 UTC @scorchingscorpio. I remade my dbz guys stories as I’m working on the figs right now.
Lord Zero: was part of the lower class of freizans but with freizas death along with King colds he immediately dissapeard form everywhere to form his own empire. 3 and a half years later he has a few planets and a small empire. He soon keeps feeling these flashes of power and heads to earth to investigate. His personality is the most stubborn you’ll meet and he almost never sleeps unless he collapse. He also is almost always training so his troops take shifts in the murder zone as they call it. When he is forced to be defeated he trains 4 times harder and logs alot more hours in a gravity room with a highly restrictive suit on to get stronger. Had heavy irritability issues.
His power scaling is that of frieza 3rd form
Dare: she is a majin with a slightly more red color scheme to buu. Has the same insatiable appetite for candy and fun but is also head over heels in love with Lord Zero. She was born form a small piece of buu that just stayed floating in the universe until it landed on a planet with alot of fruit. Lord Zero found her and seeing her power and potential he took her in as a general. She when angry enough gets another set of arms.Her power scaling is buff buu.
Destroy: he is a captured namekian that was sold into slavery. Zero seeing his raw strength bought him at tested him. To zeros supries he could go giant namekian easily and when given a bladed weapon (preferably an axe since that is his mastery) he becomes a devastating force of balanced everything. His personality is that of a philosophical being. All ways thinking and he thinks very fast. He has trouble relying on instinct. He is also a part time inventor when board.
Maximus anderx(Max): is a saiyan who can’t get angry at all it seems. This guy has seen it all and the worst he has gotten was mifed. He is like goku but rarely eats because he is training so much. His ki control is absolutely atrocious and despite having alot it leaks out everywhere. He has an ability called aura burst witch is like kaioken but MUCH stronger however the cost is MUCH greater. Max has the body and stamina to control this naturally to the point where aura burst 1 is pretty much in all the time. Aura burst 1 is equal to kaioken x3 and he can go to aura burst 5 witch is kaioken x 10000 but can only hold it for 10 seconds before he collapses from strain.
His scaling is goku ssj4
Edward: a human who got lost in space and was found by zero. Seeing his calm control the opponents energy fighting style he decided to let him stick around. Edward has long silver hair with a Dumbledore beard and some cool sports shades. Along with this he can block ki of opponents or most of the kids for the stronger ones. It’s a pretty new one so he is constantly refining it but he is also teaching max it.
Midknight: she is a dark saiyan from the new universe 13 (xenoverse story, tokitoki egg) she can’t go shadow saiyan as the “trigger” hasn’t been met dark saiyans can make temporary or permanent sacrifices for huge leaps in power for example tempory sacrifice of color for 1.5 x the power boost. She is the strongest of them with terrifying force and strength but also suffers from ki and anger control.
Her sister is vira who is calm and Collected. She can go to shadow saiyan 2 and has mass amounts of ki and almost absolute control of the ki (dark saiyans use a form of dark ki but I’m finding a better name) they both scale around goku ssj2
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Ramox is making dbz figures? Welp time to serve my country in the dbz control department.
im making quality figs not the same round headed trash we see often now
Why do send this stuff to review at the worst times?
I’ll be back later
In the mean while
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review this, if you want. I don’t f#cking care
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Dear God i can’t be friggin bothered rn, mah brain is ded
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Too much writing with too little spaces
*Sigh*
I have been trying to dodge doing this, but f#ck it
First off, Zero. Within the first seconds you already you fu#ked up, how many times do I have to tell you. IT’S ARCOSIAN NOT FrEiZaNs! ALso, I noticed this about all your characters’ descriptions. Can you even grammar, bro ? There are so many errors in your writing, it’s not even funny. HOW OLD ARE YOU ANYWAY?
Getting off topic, Anyway, why does he need to have flashes of power instead of getting information from someone else. Acrosians can’t sense energy so that makes no sense. You also failed to establish how he got his empire, come on man.
Also, he is an emperor, so why would train his troops? Emperors leave that to high ranking members of the empire like for example, Frieza wouldn’t train his army himself, he would leave that to Zarbon, the Ginyu Force or Dodoria. On ward, WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY “WHEN HE IS FORCED TO BE DEFEATED!!” that makes no sense. DO you mean, when a troop member beats him or a troop member gets too close too his strength? But the training methods are at least simplistic and I can see happening. But at least, he is reasonably scaled. I’ll give you that.
Sorry. Not by his troops. I’m sh!_ At English I’m sixteen but my English is still terrible. Arcosians can sense energy both Bardock (last I remember it was why he didn’t escape with goku) and frieza can as he can sense gokus energy and it’s that small currently and he heavily perfers to do things himself. Its a character flaw
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Dare doesn’t have any character other than “Love Interest”
But this isn’t too bad. But the buff buu power scale, no. If anything Zero would be constantly pissed off at her because she is WAY out of his league in strength and fighting ability. If ya ask me, you should make her as strong as full power final form frieza.
Destroy
slavery? hmm OK OK. Zero bought him? OK OK. He could use a bladed weapon, OK. He could go giant namekian? Ok. Philosophical being? No, I see this dude being a loss cannon, no plan, just smash. Kinda like TMNT: Rise of the TMNTs Raphael. He should also have a quick hot temper.
In terms of power(you didn’t establish that) I think he should be ….Android 19 level after taking goku’s energy
I also see him using this type of sword
Trunks uses a sword though is my argument
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What? That makes no sense
I don’t want to go into the sword craze. Name 5 popular characters who use an axe
easy!
Ikkaku with his bankai
Bartre
Aeon Calcos
Durotan
Dozla
Geitz
Labrys
Hico
But whatever. I see where your coming from
Maxius anderx(Max)
For one, not a sayian name, still. Let’s see. Seen it all, Typical. Got Mifed? The freak you mean by mif. He is like goku, ok. Typical but whatever.
His ki control is absolutely atrocious? Atrocious meaning extremely bad or unpleasant. So you even said that he is horrible at ki control. SO HE CAN’T USE KAIOKEN!!! To use such a thing, you need excellent ki control. But it’s not kaioken anymore it’s AuRa BuRsT. You also say that the cost is great but you you don’t say how great/ bad. But you can say that Aura burst 1 equals to kaioken x3, ok. Fine. Aura Burst 5 equals kaioken x1000-WHAT!?!??!?!?!?!? 3 to 100000 is a 3,333,333% increase!! WHAT THE FREAK!!! Just NO!
Even if you said x3 then x9 then x15 then x21 then x27. That would be cool. But times 100000? Just no.
Onward, Power equal to ssj4 gok-HELL NAH!!!! Dial that down to to imperfect cell level after he absorbed the humans.
Sorry. Old notes typing but I scale max at full power goku ssj3. His aura burst is similar to what you said but requires little ki control. However the stamina effects are much higher. Also if you don’t like the name what do you suggest for aura burst
..ssj3 is still too strong compare to everyone else. My recommendation makes more sense
Perfect cell?
Cause zero is ironically despite hating it filled his cast with stronger than him warriors so he could train efficiently
🤦
IMPERFECT CELL, GOD DAMN IT!!
Ok ok fine I will depower him to that point. Now the question is. How should our teams meat
*meet
…I don’t know
Edward:
A human lost in space and found by zero? What?
How?
and Why?
Why did Zero even bother saving this guy? How did he get lost in space? What is this dude on?
Your wording got confusing. So to my knowledge, he is good at ki control and attacks? I think? And he is like a mentor figure to the younger trainees that are under Zero. He has a Dumbledore beard with sliver long hair and cool shades. So…a wannabe master roshi?
You again didn’t say what level he was.
So let me do it for you, I think his level should be Semi-cell saga tien level.
Sorry started to rush because of school but he is krillen universal survivor arc and he dosent have roshis perv problem. Zero decided to because he was having a good day. And Edward was trying to explore space but his ship broke
Any why would Edward need a ship?
How else is he going to explore space
Why though?! Is he like some kind of astronomer?
You need to establish these things!!
The wanted to harness the energy of the stars and map out the universe
He is an explorer
Already being done from earth using satellites.
There is no reason for him being in space
Farther than earth or 1or 2 light years away. And he wants to make extensively categorized. Detailed 3D maps of the the universe. Not just locations
BRO, as I said
Being done from earth with satellites traveling around the Universe and other universe going hundreds and hundreds of of light years from our solar system.
People are using satellites and today’s computers to do all the things you said. As I said, no point for him being in spaces going 1, 2 light years away. When we have tech that can go hundreds and thousands of light years away
So how the he’ll dose zero find him because he is supposed to meet him before he gets to earth
Also I got an idea of what makes version of kaioken should be called
ドラゴンゴースト
Doragongōsuto
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̴̡͙̘͐̿̒̓
̴̧̲͈͍́
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I get the sudden feeling of you saying to basically do all this again
No, just think about this stuff for a while and change it a bit
Midknight
a Dark Sayian, So like Turles? I;m going yo assume like Turles. She can’t go shadow? You do know that is Xenoverse 2 mod, right? Trigger, Sacrifice for huge leaps in power. OK sounds neat. She is the strongest of them? Bold as freak statement to make, i’m against that but whatever. Suffers from Ki and Anger control? Huh. You mean can’t control her ki and has anger issues?
Onward, Visa=typical yang version of an evil character.
You say that they are goku ssj2 level. Fair. But I would rather say around Android 16 level
Visa? Damn auto correct. Vira. And as for midknight she can control her ki moderately but had not temper management especially when her sister is in danger