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rewrite 4 (i think)
Lord Zero. after frieza left for earth he departed on his own conquest for power and to eventually beat Frieza. he was quite successful and powerful by year 3. this is when he heard of earth and the one place that that even frieza couldn’t conquer. confused with his generals he went there and was even more confused as the human were weak. then he saw goku
as for power scale (sigh) i scale him at imperfect cell although it should be semi perfect cellMaxris endrix (max) one of the few saiyans he picked up on his adventures. he is a saiyan who learned dragon god rage (i dont know a fancy name for that yet) witch is kaioken x1.5. he can go up to (insert name)x100 but any further than that and his body will be ripped apart. he regularly trains in bolth a modified grav room and high pressure room. he also has tried to move into them however zero wont let him there. he is goku but more battle happy and around broly built at lssj. he wont go any form of ssj until much later and im still working out the kinks of it.
in terms of raw strengh i scale him goku ssj3 in ki control is krillenDare a majin who fell in love with zero. she went yandere for him and if someone dose harm him she hunt whoever that was and try everything to kill them and everyone there close to. she is obsessed with gum and i scale her at super buu gohan absorbed.
Destroy being a slave most of his life he knows what its like being on the short stick of life. once he found out the concept of justice and found his sense of right and wrong he became enraged. after a long time going from master to master freeing slaves in secret h was bought by zero who saw his potential. destroy was given a battle ax for most combat situations. He is easily anger and brash often taking insults or what appears to be insults at him. He is red for the face and mucle features but everything else is void black. He can go giant namekian but not for a long time. I scale him at piccolo beginning of the buu arc
Edward is the wisdom amongst these reckless fighters. He is an expert of ranged attacks and ki control. He is teaching max to control his MASS amount of ki. He is age wise immortal but otherwise has his limits before death. He usually is wearing a blue tank top and black jeans with a full power roshi build. I scale him at roshi tournament of power.
Android 38. He is an android model that wasnāt ever finished. When Edward and zero discovered and finished him they found that he has an OBNOXIOUS amount genki (I believe thatās the life force but correct me if im wrong). He however cannot fight to save his life as he is mostly a pacifist. He can heal people and remove strain from body using his powers he can even allow someone extra time in strenuous or energy consuming forms.



what do you think
Pretty good backstories.Although I think Dare needs to be a little fleshed out more.
I canāt review this right now. Tutoring
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Why are you tutoring me? I never asked
No no
I said tutoring because I was in tutoring
But why did you mention me
To Review this site if you wanted
The second I saw the first frezia
I stopped reading
Oh god. Iām in for one of those
I will review after school today
Itās time for my review, letās make this a quick one.
*reading*
Lord Zero… *sigh* why even bother making him a Lord at this point? And why tie him in with FRIEZA? You also failed to map out the time of the events! Is this taking place after Namek? IMPOSSIBLE because he was dispatched by trunks, Is this taking place after the golden Frieza movie? Impossible again, he got killed by Goku. So the only time that Frieza arrives to earth and leaves earth is AFTER the tournament of power. And then you say he trained and then he BEAT Frieza. *sigh*
I donāt even need to say why this is so screwy. But I will. One, Frieza has trained and meditated to a point where he has mastered his golden form with is stronger than ssjgss. It would be impossible for him to beat Frieza. Two, if Frieza knew that someone was plotting to get stronger than him and beat him, Frieza would kill them. HELL, how Frieza got his golden form after a few months is stupid! And why even bother going to earth? If Frieza was in such a hurry to retreat earth with his tail between his legs even with his golden form. THEN WHY WOULD A SEMI-PERFECT LEVEL ZERO GO TO EARTH??? He obviously has a death wish.
he dosent know that. as an arcosian last i checked freiza is the pinnacle of their race. that being said everyone wants to be on top. plus he will get his ass kicked thoroughly. he was extensively far from earth so he has no idea of the events that took place
Maxris, oh god. This doesnāt sound like a Sayian name in the slightest.
You havenāt come up with the name of the power up. Ok, I will not hold you to that. That type of stuff is hard. But where in the heck can he get a high pressure room and a gravity chamber? Itās implausible.
He is more battle that Goku, Iām sorry for him. And around broly built in lssj. But right after you say he canāt go into any forms. Make up your mind. And you say would scale him to ssj3 Goku but you scaled zero to semi cell. That is a BIG gap in power.
the ability is a technique and state of mind and thats part of zeros journey. most of his crew is stronger than him but this will eventually change.
and his body has trouble producing s cells along with having extreme trouble getting angry. this will change later but im still thinking of story for that
Dare-
So…a majin verse of kale. Thatās basic her whole character. A majin kale.
She is also given reason to even like zero. Making thier relationship forced.
And you called her to ….
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NO!! JUST NO!!!
im still thinking of something and whats wrong with a bubble gum obsessed majin?
The phone auto corrected scaled to called
gotanks absorbed or normal super buu cause definitely not kid buu
You do know kid buu is weaker, right?
oh wait right because it didnt take vegito
ok where would you scale her on the buu scale
You can scale a character thoughout any event despite thier species
Destroy- I found no problems.
The old geezer- no problem other than itās too much like roshi and you failed to point out how he met max
Android 38-
So heās a healer, cool
The giving people extra ki seems ok
But heās basically a walking target
Also, Android 38 is taken
wait really oh wait. um 64?
Ok
for the old geezer i got no ideas and ill say he met him when zero and friends went to earth