Midknight

a Dark Sayian, So like Turles? I;m going yo assume like Turles. She can’t go shadow? You do know that is Xenoverse 2 mod, right? Trigger, Sacrifice for huge leaps in power. OK sounds neat. She is the strongest of them? Bold as freak statement to make, i’m against that but whatever. Suffers from Ki and Anger control? Huh. You mean can’t control her ki and has anger issues?
Onward, Visa=typical yang version of an evil character.
You say that they are goku ssj2 level. Fair. But I would rather say around Android 16 level

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What? That makes no sense

Edward:

A human lost in space and found by zero? What?
How?
and Why?

Why did Zero even bother saving this guy? How did he get lost in space? What is this dude on?
Your wording got confusing. So to my knowledge, he is good at ki control and attacks? I think? And he is like a mentor figure to the younger trainees that are under Zero. He has a Dumbledore beard with sliver long hair and cool shades. So…a wannabe master roshi?
You again didn\’t say what level he was.
So let me do it for you, I think his level should be Semi-cell saga tien level.

Maxius anderx(Max)

For one, not a sayian name, still. Let\’s see. Seen it all, Typical. Got Mifed? The freak you mean by mif. He is like goku, ok. Typical but whatever.
His ki control is absolutely atrocious? Atrocious meaning extremely bad or unpleasant. So you even said that he is horrible at ki control. SO HE CAN\’T USE KAIOKEN!!! To use such a thing, you need excellent ki control. But it\’s not kaioken anymore it\’s AuRa BuRsT. You also say that the cost is great but you you don\’t say how great/ bad. But you can say that Aura burst 1 equals to kaioken x3, ok. Fine. Aura Burst 5 equals kaioken x1000-WHAT!?!??!?!?!?!? 3 to 100000 is a 3,333,333% increase!! WHAT THE FREAK!!! Just NO!
Even if you said x3 then x9 then x15 then x21 then x27. That would be cool. But times 100000? Just no.
Onward, Power equal to ssj4 gok-HELL NAH!!!! Dial that down to to imperfect cell level after he absorbed the humans.

Destroy
slavery? hmm OK OK. Zero bought him? OK OK. He could use a bladed weapon, OK. He could go giant namekian? Ok. Philosophical being? No, I see this dude being a loss cannon, no plan, just smash. Kinda like TMNT: Rise of the TMNTs Raphael. He should also have a quick hot temper.

In terms of power(you didn\’t establish that) I think he should be ….Android 19 level after taking goku\’s energy

I also see him using this type of sword

First off, Zero. Within the first seconds you already you fu#ked up, how many times do I have to tell you. IT’S ARCOSIAN NOT FrEiZaNs! ALso, I noticed this about all your characters’ descriptions. Can you even grammar, bro ? There are so many errors in your writing, it’s not even funny. HOW OLD ARE YOU ANYWAY?
Getting off topic, Anyway, why does he need to have flashes of power instead of getting information from someone else. Acrosians can’t sense energy so that makes no sense. You also failed to establish how he got his empire, come on man.

Also, he is an emperor, so why would train his troops? Emperors leave that to high ranking members of the empire like for example, Frieza wouldn’t train his army himself, he would leave that to Zarbon, the Ginyu Force or Dodoria. On ward, WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY “WHEN HE IS FORCED TO BE DEFEATED!!” that makes no sense. DO you mean, when a troop member beats him or a troop member gets too close too his strength? But the training methods are at least simplistic and I can see happening. But at least, he is reasonably scaled. I’ll give you that.

and @kniferulez

Why do send this stuff to review at the worst times?
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