I only watched 25 seconds (oof) so i’ll just give you some epic tips and tricks because I’m definitely omniscient and know everything about animation and filmmaking ever (don’t @ me)

So like, it’s fine to start off with action or combat, some of the best do that like the classice Transformer’s Movie, immediately starting with some bloke casually eating an entire fucking planet because “fuck you i’m Unicron”. The issue however lies in the fact that there’s no sort of way to know who’s who and where is where.
The best way to do this is by using a few clips that kinda just display the area. Just have a few panning shots of the area (i have literally no idea what the area is so i’ll just say it’s a mountainous plateau), have the camera start broad, showing the full area, the stars in the sky, the long rows of maintain ridges. Then, focus more on the ‘stage’ they’re fighting on, maybe have a few puffs of smoke from where they’re actually ‘physically abusing eachother’.

I think you did this but in the opening scenes, get characters to refer to eachother by name a lot more than usual so people remember the names easier later on. That’s just a tippy tip tho