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    Uncontrolled edge 11 2019-02-19 18:56:21 UTC

    help i need constructive criticism i made a bad anim and i need tips to get gud at punching lol i suck

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    • Dark green guy vs green guy. Yes that’s a perfect title for the animation.

      2019-02-19 19:00:53 UTC 0
    • why do you think it’s bad though, do you see what’s “wrong” with it?

      anyway right away, punching dude, his feet are all over the place

      stand up and punch

      bet your feet didn’t move

      so why does green dudes feet move, right?

      2019-02-19 19:20:04 UTC 0
    • Ok one problem is the footing there’s no indication where they are standing.
      You need to ease up the animation it kinda looks choppy.try first animating a part and then go back and see which parts you need to add a in between frame this will help make the animation smoother.
      The camera has to be closer it feels abit off its usually better to animate first then work on the camera work,for example have the camera revolve around the fighters like smash bros camera.
      Make the 2 fighters have different fighting styles from each other this adds a more dynamic effect between the 2 fighters.

      2019-02-19 19:33:10 UTC 1
      • Replying to: VamrackOk one problem is the footing there's no indication where t

        thank you its a little hard the diffrent fighting style part cause there being animated by the same person i can think of something

        2019-02-19 21:05:07 UTC 1