All three categories are applicable to this animation.
This is a story-based animation focusing on Vamrack’s characters. As a fighting and comedy animation, it’s pretty good. Pacing is a bit over the place at stages, and the fighting has the typical style of vamrack but sometimes is sloppy. It also is completely 2D, so there aren’t many dynamic angles that make it interesting. Comedy is pretty good and quick, and it is fairly humorous during fights. There isn’t much personality behind Arch and Mewlia besides “lovers” (which can be a bit cringy at times), though Snipe has a bit more to him and he’s pretty nice to watch.
However, there isn’t much story to this in the slightest. It’s just people fighting with some dialogue, not much of a story to it. That would be fine if the animation wasn’t centered on a story, but it is, so it takes quite a bit of points off.
Overall, there isn’t much story here, but it is an enjoyable animation nonetheless. It gets points off for the story not being all there, but it still is fun to watch.
Sometimes theres some odd animation, but the animation overall is amazing. It’s satisfying. Not really much in terms of story here, but there’s something. Theres a little bit of work put into visuals but there’s problems with scaling and some other things. Humor like always is great, you just gotta keep that up.
All three categories are applicable to this animation.
This is a story-based animation focusing on Vamrack’s characters. As a fighting and comedy animation, it’s pretty good. Pacing is a bit over the place at stages, and the fighting has the typical style of vamrack but sometimes is sloppy. It also is completely 2D, so there aren’t many dynamic angles that make it interesting. Comedy is pretty good and quick, and it is fairly humorous during fights. There isn’t much personality behind Arch and Mewlia besides “lovers” (which can be a bit cringy at times), though Snipe has a bit more to him and he’s pretty nice to watch.
However, there isn’t much story to this in the slightest. It’s just people fighting with some dialogue, not much of a story to it. That would be fine if the animation wasn’t centered on a story, but it is, so it takes quite a bit of points off.
Overall, there isn’t much story here, but it is an enjoyable animation nonetheless. It gets points off for the story not being all there, but it still is fun to watch.
3/5.
PL Team Slave OwnerSometimes theres some odd animation, but the animation overall is amazing. It’s satisfying. Not really much in terms of story here, but there’s something. Theres a little bit of work put into visuals but there’s problems with scaling and some other things. Humor like always is great, you just gotta keep that up.