Story and humor are inapplicable to this animation, so I won’t critique them.
This animation is pretty decent. It’s essentially 30 seconds of a short fight. I liked the incorporation of different catastrophes occurring with every strike. However, it suffers from a lack of content for sure, and there definitely could be more substance to this animation. I like the premise, but the main problem of this animation isn’t what it has, but rather what it doesn’t have. It just needs more to be considered better. The content shown is decent, but there is too little of it to actually make an impact or stand out.
A pretty average animation. Visally it pulls from it’s enjoyment as every strike causes something big like a mountain being destroyed or the ground being cracked. Now, this isn’t a bad thing considering the focus of the animation and what it is going for, but the problem here is the fact that. The visuals show aren’t shown consistently though background. You should consistently see the ruin and see how the damgae progresses in this scenario. Without it, the satisfaction and enjoyment is dissapointing. Animation is okay too, but nothing special.
2/5
Story and humor are inapplicable to this animation, so I won’t critique them.
This animation is pretty decent. It’s essentially 30 seconds of a short fight. I liked the incorporation of different catastrophes occurring with every strike. However, it suffers from a lack of content for sure, and there definitely could be more substance to this animation. I like the premise, but the main problem of this animation isn’t what it has, but rather what it doesn’t have. It just needs more to be considered better. The content shown is decent, but there is too little of it to actually make an impact or stand out.
2/5.
PL Team Slave OwnerA pretty average animation. Visally it pulls from it’s enjoyment as every strike causes something big like a mountain being destroyed or the ground being cracked. Now, this isn’t a bad thing considering the focus of the animation and what it is going for, but the problem here is the fact that. The visuals show aren’t shown consistently though background. You should consistently see the ruin and see how the damgae progresses in this scenario. Without it, the satisfaction and enjoyment is dissapointing. Animation is okay too, but nothing special.
2/5
meh