Capital Climax Part 1

Capital Climax Part 1

An animation by Profile PhotoAᴇøɴ Wᴏʟғ spotlighted on Saturday July 18, 2020

The first breath on the war in the capital.

Aeon follows a challenge provided by his mother, Marshal Eva. As soon as he arrives at the training building - where he once trained - both begin a dangerous confrontation that takes them from the roof to the inside of the room.

Upon closing, Aeon notes that he underestimated the Marshal too much, and it is she is perhaps, something never seen before.

Previous Episode: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HwxeWRLeaZQ

Overall: 4.00 / 5
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Visuals: 4.6 / 5 Story: 4.1 / 5 Humor: 3.4 / 5

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Bluu190
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So good I give it a 8/10 because nobody NEVER gives 10/10

OOFSANSANIMS
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Best animation ever

HeadlessHorselessHorsemann
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10/10 because its hard to see anything, and thats how an anime works

Lulu
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Effects were about the best ive seen throughout my entire animation career.

The smoothness was epic as well.

I think character design can be a bit more detailed and have more correlation to the characters’ abilities and backstory but its still good

Idk about humor, i dont see much comedy there.

The story actually was decent. But its not particularly unique. I think there is a bit more potential in this.

Really doe. This was one of the best or the best animation i’ve seen on stick nodes.

Visuals: 5/5
Story: 4/5
Humor: n/a
Overall: 5/5

Toxic911 Animations
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Story and humor are relatively inapplicable to this animation (there isn’t an overarching story, the dialogue is just for the sake of the fight and it’s just a fight animation), so I won’t critique it.

It’s painful to critique this one.

I enjoy Aeon’s content, and the animation quality is well-done, but a good chunk of this entire animation is traced and referenced. It’s good that Aeon actually put the specific fights he traced within the description, but I went through every single reference he listed and combined the specific parts that were traced together, and unfortunately those specific fight sequences made up practically a majority of the fight animation. When they weren’t overtly traced, their ideas were taken and reapplied to this animation in a very similar fashion. It’s good that Aeon is publically admitting that he traced animations, and the overall animation looks great and is enjoyable, but I still can’t give credit to him for this fight when every aspect of the fight that is the most powerful or memorable is taken from something else. Aeon needs to learn how to be his own creator with his own character, it is a constant factor that he traces other animations and includes them in his own work, as well as taking aspects of other characters and adding it to his own (Dark under the law wolf gloves, Ruby Scythe, Gildedguy sword scene, the list goes on). Honestly tracing some elements for the sake of improvement is fine (if one actually lists what they traced and doesn’t take full responsibility for it, as Aeon did), but when a majority of the work you produce is traced, is the animation itself good because of the animator who made it, or is it good because it is a Frankenstein’s monster, a conglomerate of other well-done animation projects made by other people all put together into one package? Credit should be given where credit is due, and you can’t give someone as much credit for tracing another popular work as much as you can give credit to the original creator. There are instances when a complete trace is actually fine (TeamFabulous2 vs. TeamFabulous2Reanimated, Heavy Is Dead vs. all other Heavy Is Dead parodies using different mediums), but the reason for this is that they are attempting to take the core aspect of these original creations and recreate them in an homage while also adding on a new aspect. Credit is still being given to the original creator, it is a tribute of respect if anything. But this? This is taking one’s own content and meshing it together with other animators in an attempt to define one’s own character and creation by the traced references of other artists. It is taking the energy, the power, the creativity, and the hard work of other talented artists and essentially taking it for oneself to define their own work.

We define our talent, our work, and ourselves by what we do, but if all we do is take the talent and hard work of other individuals and use it to define the majority of who we are, we become crude illusions, meaningless reflections without substance depicting greater glory and talent created by hard-working artists who set to define themselves.

The term “Steal like an artist” is widely used for a reason, and nothing in the world is completely original, but that is no excuse to define ourselves and our work entirely based on the merits of other people.

I won’t give a 1/5 because there are some parts in which Aeon animated himself, but he needs to find his own style and own character without directly taking content from other artists. Lose the Dark under the law gloves, lose the Ruby Scythe, lose the traced My Hero Academia and Naruto scenes, get rid of all of it, and create something that is of your own substance, not a pale and crude imitation of something else. Tracing is fine (when you credit the people you are tracing) as long as it doesn’t define what content you produce and who you are as an artist. Artists can trace, but tracing doesn’t make one an artist, only a charlatan.

Low 2/5.

Toxic911 Animations
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Reading back on this, I realize I was particularly harsh in this critique, so I’m going to clarify some things.

Nothing I said within this was meant to criticize Aeon personally, and I apologize if it was conveyed in that way. If anything, I was this critical because I respect Aeon as an artist quite a lot. I’m not calling Aeon a charlatan or talentless, quite the contrary, he’s a great content creator, specifically why I am focusing on the tracing situation.

I believe Aeon is capable of producing fantastic quality work of his own design, and I do believe as an artist and animator, he can accomplish some great features in the future. However, I do not believe the road to this path starts with completely tracing off of other existing arts and implementing it into his own work to a point where a majority of the content Aeon produces is owed to other work. Aeon is capable of great stuff, and I think it would be a shame if he were limited to tracing other work into his own to a point where other people’s work is more featured than his own. This critique is simply calling him to be more original with what he creates and features. It is completely fine to take ideas from others and take a unique aspect with it (I’d be a hypocrite if I said otherwise) or trace some work for the sake of improvement, but it’s a shame to limit oneself and their own creative ideas to just copying from others.

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First off. The good stuff. The animation is pretty solid along with the cinematic work. The angles are great at the start and effects are pretty great. Now the bad stuff. This is a series. For the first part to it, it tells you nothing about the story. The only information you get is in the description. The story here at this point is on the level of elements. Which is not good as that means the video has no story despite being a series part. Now onto the fight scene. The fight scene looks amazing with lot’s of angles and stuff like that. But most of it is traced. 7 minutes of traced animation. Good that you take note of this and say you won’t do it in the future, but that’s a stain on this video still. I can’t give credit for a fight scene that is primarily traced. There needs to be an aspect of creativity in a video. Especially when you are making a series with a story with your own characters. Take inspiration and only go as far as that in a series.
Low 2/5

Harlan.gamer
Harlan.gamer

I gotta say, out of all the traced animation i have seen on sticknodes. This was probably the best out of them all, however i literally see an entire fight traced fully not referenced/inspired like there’s a my hero academia heroes rising traced and then…. ah well,he’s older animations were much more original even if it looks much worse…