Story and humor are inapplicable to this animation, so I won’t critique them.
This is well done in terms of actual animation. The movements are well-done, and the effects are nice, though there certainly could be more. What drags this fight animation down, however, is the lack of normal angles. Dynamic angles really help enhance fights, but if they are only used all the time, they confuse the scene and placements of fighters and create scenes confusing to the eye. The pacing of the dialogue also hinders the rest of the animation, and it ends way too quickly. Overall, the animation is good, so I recommend watching it if you want to practice/see some good dynamic angles. However, the fight as a whole is not too good.
This had potential but was held down by several things. The angles used were all cool but made no sense considering a background wasn’t established and normal angles and viewpoints weren’t used at all. Though the movements in this were great and the angles used were all cool with the nice effects. But camera work was just atrocious as it made the fight harder to watch. There was also no buildup which pulls away from the animation. This ends up as another average animation in the end due to the angles.
2/5
Story and humor are inapplicable to this animation, so I won’t critique them.
This is well done in terms of actual animation. The movements are well-done, and the effects are nice, though there certainly could be more. What drags this fight animation down, however, is the lack of normal angles. Dynamic angles really help enhance fights, but if they are only used all the time, they confuse the scene and placements of fighters and create scenes confusing to the eye. The pacing of the dialogue also hinders the rest of the animation, and it ends way too quickly. Overall, the animation is good, so I recommend watching it if you want to practice/see some good dynamic angles. However, the fight as a whole is not too good.
2/5.
PL Team Slave OwnerThis had potential but was held down by several things. The angles used were all cool but made no sense considering a background wasn’t established and normal angles and viewpoints weren’t used at all. Though the movements in this were great and the angles used were all cool with the nice effects. But camera work was just atrocious as it made the fight harder to watch. There was also no buildup which pulls away from the animation. This ends up as another average animation in the end due to the angles.
2/5