This is just, wow. I wasn’t expecting much, but this impressed me. You did an outstanding job on the animation itself with amazing effects and clean movements. A creative asthetic as well was established which really is not common, but you did it. There was a slight attempt at humor which is a bonus but this did suprise me and it’s an example of what an OC battle should be.
3/5
Story and Humor are inapplicable to this animation, so I won’t critique them.
This animation is decent. It’s enjoyable for what it is, but it also has many flaws associated with it. The pacing is pretty abysmal, and the ending feels like a “that was it?” moment. It ends so abruptly and without finality that the fight itself feels dragged down by it. The dialogue is pretty bad as well, and the pauses they take to talk do not contribute to the pacing in the slightest. Besides that, the rest of the fight is pretty well animated and looks very nice. It’s a recurring problem with Braker that he has these great sequences of fighting followed by long pauses and nonsensical pacing, but this animation seems to personify that the most. I have to give it a low 3/5. It’s decent but has a lot to work on.
PL Team Slave OwnerThis is just, wow. I wasn’t expecting much, but this impressed me. You did an outstanding job on the animation itself with amazing effects and clean movements. A creative asthetic as well was established which really is not common, but you did it. There was a slight attempt at humor which is a bonus but this did suprise me and it’s an example of what an OC battle should be.
3/5
Story and Humor are inapplicable to this animation, so I won’t critique them.
This animation is decent. It’s enjoyable for what it is, but it also has many flaws associated with it. The pacing is pretty abysmal, and the ending feels like a “that was it?” moment. It ends so abruptly and without finality that the fight itself feels dragged down by it. The dialogue is pretty bad as well, and the pauses they take to talk do not contribute to the pacing in the slightest. Besides that, the rest of the fight is pretty well animated and looks very nice. It’s a recurring problem with Braker that he has these great sequences of fighting followed by long pauses and nonsensical pacing, but this animation seems to personify that the most. I have to give it a low 3/5. It’s decent but has a lot to work on.
Low 3/5.