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Toxic911 Animations“S e r i e s R e v i e w”

A pretty well-made animation in general! There are some clear bugs here, and the pacing isn’t exactly as precise as it could be. Dialogue could be improved, this is the standard kind of fighting animation dialogue one would expect. The fight has some interesting angles to it, and it clearly depicts stylizations of the animator.

Overall, a quick enjoyable experience to view! A standard fight that is lacking in some aspects, but nonetheless is fun to see.

3/5.

Kaijynn
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Kaijynnoccifercrusaderuc-votersubscriberpro-noderfeatured-lvl1uc-winner-lvl1Just your friendly local cryptid. I'll eat your bones.

The visuals of this are decent. The overall fight is pretty well-animated, but it suffers from some bugs. The animation itself is a little choppy, and the use of “the screen suddenly going black right before an attack hits” is used a bit too much. The pacing of the fight is also interrupted by unneeded dialogue.

Being an animation made strictly to pit two oc’s against each other, the plot is nonexistent. The same goes for the humor, if I’m honest.

Overall, a 5/10.

Explosive Bullet
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Explosive Bulletoccifercrusaderuc-votersubscriberlegendary-noderfeatured-lvl3uc-winner-lvl4PL Team Slave Owner

As mentioned by Toxic, pacing is off. Once I watched it, I could easily see that, but as I predicted, the animation is pretty solid. There is also a few notable bugs as mentioned by other people with layering and positioning of certain effects and how fitting some of the effects are. But the animation and quality of alot of the effects make up for that. It does suffer from an absense of any story orreason that they are fighting, but it’s an OC battle so I will give it a little bit of slack there. Visually, there are a few issues like a lack of background, sometimes bland designs and other stuff but it’s still pretty good in certain areas like the use of reflections, blood, ect. It also does suffer from an awkward inconsistency of framerate where it drops to 2 fps in dialogue. Other than that, it’s a solid above average spotlight animation. Good work!

Catt
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Aight..

As a musician, I can say that the music choice is absolutely horrible. A more progressive song would be more fitting, this is just used as something to fill in the silence. The volume is also way too low for the music to have any effect.

The seconds thing I have about this are the sound effects; Why. Why these cheap sounding boxing sounds as hits, it sounds super ironic. I also feel like there could be less use of the default sound effects, as they are also a bit lame. Mabye getting a sound pack or something of that sort will help.

And now the animation.. oh no..
Literally the entire animation is stiff, every single scene has some sort of stiffnes to it. It’s also very “stop and go”, it stop up after every action, which breaks the flow.
The constant scene change breaks up the combat and flow way too much, it almost feels like an excuse to not animate as much.
And then there’s the very unnecessary stop at 0:30, it completely ruins the action, it has no meaning to the “story” and only functions as an excuse to not animate as much.
The hit at 0:27 feels very weak, like ridiculously weak. The sound effect doesn’t help at all either. Accommodating it with that weirdly angled kick didn’t help either.
The blood on 0:59 was very poorly done, didn’t even care to align it with the blade. Not to mention the fact the the cute obviously went the same way, but when showing joker’s face, they went opposite of each other.
(These flying scenes are also getting a bit intense)

1:18…. what even…

At 1:30, he should have been cut in half, but the fact that he could still RUN after that is ridiculous.

The ending was pretty bad and lazy too, it’s just a quick way to end it. Joker’s posture looks like something a beginner would make too.

All in all, I’d rate it 6/10.
Great potential, decent execution.

Also the floor constantly going in front of the stick figures is very annoying.