Good action maybe add a little more shake add to the dramatic levels of it maybe when they get serious like do some behind the scene stuff the fighting was pretty stiff but good job overall I still don’t know the story tho…??

Effects are too simple, characters are too simple.
There’s almost no story
But the humor is good, a Jojo reference was made.

Story and humor are inapplicable to this animation, so I won’t critique them.

This is overall a very lackluster fight. The effects are very underwhelming and lack a significant presence or impact. This is another example of how tween can be a detriment to animation, as the animation itself loses power within hits because of how abnormally smooth movements are. Smooth movements are a plus, but there is such a thing as “too smooth”, as it removes impact and power from attacks. The choreography of the fight itself isn’t well done, and neither is the pacing. It’s decent for low standards and could be considered enjoyable, but it certainly isn’t spectacular. There are a lot of animation problems in here as well that simply bring the fight way down.

1/5.