Humor is inapplicable to this animation, so I won’t critique it.
Because this is an unfinished work in progress of an animation and not any final product, I will not critique it with that in mind.
This would overall have been a good start to a series. There are some obvious flaws, like some of the dialogue and the pacing itself. The lack of sound also would have been an obvious flaw but since this is unfinished, that is understandable. The animation is on point and a lot of the angles are very helpful to advance scenes and make even basic conversations appear interesting. The introduction of the characters are all well done, and the use of fullbodies in this manner is very well done. I can’t give full points since this is unfinished and there still are obvious flaws, but this had quite the potential.
This really had potential would have loved to see this step out as a finished product. First of all, flaws were all obvious including the animation being a bit choppy, lack of any sounds, certain details being strangely lacking compared to the rest of the scene and a buildup of story that doesn’t quite build up enough. But this series held unique visuals, great use of angles and short and simple dialogue alongside consistent use of backgrounds that held a good scene. Overall, I would recommend this as it had potential, but unfortunatly this is cancelled and won’t be built upon.
3/5
Humor is inapplicable to this animation, so I won’t critique it.
Because this is an unfinished work in progress of an animation and not any final product, I will not critique it with that in mind.
This would overall have been a good start to a series. There are some obvious flaws, like some of the dialogue and the pacing itself. The lack of sound also would have been an obvious flaw but since this is unfinished, that is understandable. The animation is on point and a lot of the angles are very helpful to advance scenes and make even basic conversations appear interesting. The introduction of the characters are all well done, and the use of fullbodies in this manner is very well done. I can’t give full points since this is unfinished and there still are obvious flaws, but this had quite the potential.
3/5.
PL Team Slave OwnerThis really had potential would have loved to see this step out as a finished product. First of all, flaws were all obvious including the animation being a bit choppy, lack of any sounds, certain details being strangely lacking compared to the rest of the scene and a buildup of story that doesn’t quite build up enough. But this series held unique visuals, great use of angles and short and simple dialogue alongside consistent use of backgrounds that held a good scene. Overall, I would recommend this as it had potential, but unfortunatly this is cancelled and won’t be built upon.
3/5