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CoolBraker Animations spotlighted on Tuesday April 24, 2018
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Since this is focused specifically on being a collab entry rather than anything for story/humor purposes, I will focus solely on the visuals, as rating anything else would be unfair.
This entry by itself, if the talking segments with Raymond and Chain were removed, would definitely be a 3/5 for me, but the talking segments just delete the pacing. It goes from incredibly fast, well-animated fighting to slow and drawn out dialogue, and this completely interrupts the flow of the fight. The dialogue could also be touched on for sure, it’s not too good.
Overall, well animated but bad pacing and dialogue slows it down. It’s still fun to watch, but just the fighting bits. The dialogue could go.
High 2/5.
PL Team Slave OwnerThis has some pretty solid animation, the strongest part of this entire thing right here. Without context I can’t exactly rate this story as an existing piece but I can exlude it from the final rating since this is just showing what you did in this animation. Visually though, there were effects that were just plain muddy and they looked like solids. I get that if thats part of the style, but when you have blurred effects in some areas like the arrows then you have a giant smoke cloud with 0 effects at all, it’s odd and the eye has to spend a bit more time figuring out what something is, and that’s very important to have that stuff clear of what it is when the animation has many fast paced segments.