Story and humor are inapplicable to this animation, so I won’t critique them. (yes there is a story, but I can’t judge that based on this quick clip so it would be unfair to review).
Overall, this is a pretty well-done sequence. In particular, I would like to commend the animation of the eyes here. In most animations, eyes just exist for the sake of either existing or making edgy overdramatic emotional faces. This animation does a good job of making reactions look solid and believable through the eyes. The dialogue could use work, and improved grammar would be nice, but the detail here is well-done as well. Overall, it’s a quick animation that is pretty good for what it is. It is just a clip of around 50 seconds and could definitely have more substance, but it is solid for what it is, and I recommend it.
I swear other people don’t know how to rate considering this has a rating for humor and story.
As a teaser, the story shouldn’t have much context. It’s just a sneak peak meant to bring in interest. The facial animation is nothing special in terms of the mouth as it appears to be just a looping movieclip. The eyes though, they show stuff. They are not just for dramatic purposes. They are there as a part of the characters which is very nice. Visually, this is consistant. Very little animation to go off of, but the animation is great and the visuals are solid. This has potential to be something really good.
4/5
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Story and humor are inapplicable to this animation, so I won’t critique them. (yes there is a story, but I can’t judge that based on this quick clip so it would be unfair to review).
Overall, this is a pretty well-done sequence. In particular, I would like to commend the animation of the eyes here. In most animations, eyes just exist for the sake of either existing or making edgy overdramatic emotional faces. This animation does a good job of making reactions look solid and believable through the eyes. The dialogue could use work, and improved grammar would be nice, but the detail here is well-done as well. Overall, it’s a quick animation that is pretty good for what it is. It is just a clip of around 50 seconds and could definitely have more substance, but it is solid for what it is, and I recommend it.
3/5.
PL Team Slave OwnerI swear other people don’t know how to rate considering this has a rating for humor and story.
As a teaser, the story shouldn’t have much context. It’s just a sneak peak meant to bring in interest. The facial animation is nothing special in terms of the mouth as it appears to be just a looping movieclip. The eyes though, they show stuff. They are not just for dramatic purposes. They are there as a part of the characters which is very nice. Visually, this is consistant. Very little animation to go off of, but the animation is great and the visuals are solid. This has potential to be something really good.
4/5