Story is inapplicable to this animation, so I won’t critique it.

Eek. I don’t know how one could manage to screw up a simple snowball fight, but this animation does it seamlessly through completely unnecessary dialogue dumps and bad cinematography. The premise of the fight is that one team has to get the flag in the middle, but a monster shows up and everyone throws snowballs at it. Animation quality is decent but extremely static. There is an abundance of abuse of tween and movieclips in this, to a point where these aspects are trying to replace substance in the animation. What really ruins this animation is the dialogue. Without it, it would be much more solid. The dialogue makes this entire sequence way too time-consuming and unenjoyable. It’s practically a chore to read every single word these characters say, and the dialogue itself isn’t well-written in the slightest. There are some humor aspects in here and they are pretty funny at times, but overall the animation itself is extremely subpar.

1/5.