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I feel like this series might push it too far sometimes
Like it’s not gonna be always edgy , but for example , the character Alisdair follows the harsh conflicts between him and his Father , who turns to be the first parts villain
He trains his son to be a prolific killing machine , so the view of a teen using guns and other weapons is already risky enough
But I also made his dad to be a soulless and abusive monster , constantly beating his own son for the smallest mistakes
Let alone , in the end of part 1 , Alisdair kills his dad in cold blood to save Adraik and Ellie
(since at this stage , he’ll not be the strongest but most skilled out of the Posse Members
, since that training and shit , it just average self defense and stuff)
, and then attempts to end himself off , being disappointed that he let his father manipulate him into harming his friends and stuffHis brown mask is also arecreation he made of his dads face in his final moments , as throughout the whole series , he still loves his father , putting him in a depressed and constantly confused state
Just so it doesn’t seem like his whole character is going to be a edge lord
Part 2 follows him being basically adopted by a man , though he is a Mercenary just like Alisdair’s father , he’ll be the polar opposite, always being there for his now Adopted son and evening encouraging him to attempt to reconcile with his old friends , training him to not only be a more efficient , but helping him with his troubles , helping him become calmer and overall a happier person
Still , child abuse and seeing teens use flipping guns might kill this series from being posted on YT and shit








Also , no . This isn’t a cry for help in the form of making a wacky story
i feel like u just spoiled basically all of part 1 tho
Not really
Jesus
That’s amazing dude
Yes , I know it’s edgy shit but I’m gonna lay out story
This is pretty good, far from edgy…Both of our Ocs have father issues…yours is way worse, mine just became Santa
All the characters have problems ,
Sauzer, tho being the oldest , he feels left out no matter what , he doesn’t feel like he deserves nor belongs with his friends
Titus feels the need to always be in control , due to not only enjoying it rather disturbingly , and being scared of not being able to control his own fate
Carmen has trust issues with everyone and hates being in command , he doesn’t want to interact with people much and he doesn’t like causing unwanted problems
Natasha always tends to feel worthless and hated by everyone , and tries her best to never make small talk with her friends
Sylvia has severe anger issues and a need to be in power as well , she feels the need to be the best in order to have people like her
Adraik is self loathing and a man of little words. He tends to have no concern for his own being , and would risk his own life to protect those he loves , rather carelessly
Conroy is a knowledge freak who always wants to be of use and in everyone’s business , trying to step in problems he shouldn’t be in
Adira is a self doubting and loose emotion chick who only wants what’s seems go be morally right even if it’s not the best choice
Alisdair is a bitter and cold person who tries closing off everything new and different and fears that his attitude will ruin his connection with his friends and lover
Cassidy always tends to feel abandoned , due to her parents always tending to her younger twin siblings , which now affects her day to day life , in which she constantly tries to get others attentions
Ellie feels alone , broken , lost , and always in danger , she’s rarely actually in peace and fears death , and tends to be too worried and afraid
All 12 boiz problems summary without full on story spoilers
Oh man…I want to know more about these characters…I’m over here struggling to get my two other Ocs Story together while it seems you have 11 characters put together
Here’s what I have for Blue Noobs the Alien
He’s the comic relief but deep down he has abandonment Issues.
He dosen’t know much of what happened to his parents and he knows his brother is hiding on Earth somewhere and his Sister is nowhere to be found…also he was Banished from his home world so now he goes to Earth in look for his Brother…But he crash lands in a forest where a guy with a high top finds him and they become best friends
Dang
Pretty Interesting storyline
I’m making a chunky story so 😳
@ralph
Make a video uploading platform so I can show children getting knocked out cold by their parents
youtube tho
epic
Interesting shit here
11/10