Activity that alien dude 2021-04-12 23:19:04 UTC User Banned Some more progress 2 Tastylemon16 · 5 years, 2 months ago Slow it down a bit i’d say. Not sure what you were going for but it seems like it’d be some cafe scene or contemplation scene so keeping things slow and steady is ideal. 2021-04-12 23:27:28 UTC 1 that alien dude · 5 years, 2 months ago User Banned Replying to: Tastylemon16Slow it down a bit i’d say. Not sure what you were going fo Its a train 2021-04-12 23:36:34 UTC 0 Tastylemon16 · 5 years, 2 months ago Replying to: that alien dudeIts a train I see, what is your character doing though? I think I can make out that the train shook him slightly but besides that I might need some more confirmation. Either ways just reduce the speed of the movement a bit by adding anticipation, then a rest, then the train shake. 2021-04-12 23:44:51 UTC 2
Slow it down a bit i’d say.
Not sure what you were going for but it seems like it’d be some cafe scene or contemplation scene so keeping things slow and steady is ideal.
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Its a train
I see, what is your character doing though?
I think I can make out that the train shook him slightly but besides that I might need some more confirmation.
Either ways just reduce the speed of the movement a bit by adding anticipation, then a rest, then the train shake.