for stories/plots, gifs are usually bad, people just prefer video for a story-based animation
for example, these scenes here *might* be okay, but because it’s a GIF it seems slow and it’s so silent
(the cigarette falling for example, that could work depending on the cinematic sound/music going on)
but without it, it just drags on
tl;dr tough to give critique with it being a gif, but it looks aight from what i can tell, make sure to kick in some good action bc that’s what ppl want
Comment any suggestions you might have below
It’s too slow
a bit slow, need more(higher) fps
for stories/plots, gifs are usually bad, people just prefer video for a story-based animation
for example, these scenes here *might* be okay, but because it’s a GIF it seems slow and it’s so silent
(the cigarette falling for example, that could work depending on the cinematic sound/music going on)
but without it, it just drags on
tl;dr tough to give critique with it being a gif, but it looks aight from what i can tell, make sure to kick in some good action bc that’s what ppl want
Add more easing and higher the fps