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    Spidersubscriberuc-winner-lvl1master-noder 2022-01-03 22:03:01 UTC

    @kingstarsalt Maybe it’s a bit wrong, but what do you think?

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    • You’ve got something here that could be VERY good if you tweaked it just a little. The 2nd hit was the best out of all 3, because you could feel the weight from the swing’s initial position to its eventual hit. It just carries itself very well, and it’s heightened by the impact felt by the opposition. The first hit however felt quite weak, due to both the lacking impact felt from the opposition and the swing not going far enough and stopping a little too quickly. It could use a little more anticipation, but it’s fine on that aspect. In terms of improving the first hit, I suggest that you make the opposition flow with it in a way, and increase its knockback. Also, try not to have the punch stop too quickly and make it flow more too, as it feels quite rigid. The 3rd hit suffers from similar issues to the 1st one. Try fixing those issues and replicating what went well with the 2nd hit, and you’ll do something REALLY good

      2022-01-03 22:16:12 UTC 8
    • Incredible

      2022-01-03 23:15:55 UTC 1