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Mellow
2022-02-11 22:24:35 UTC I asked before if some of you guys were interested in reading the premise of Mellow’s story. Well, I’ve written it again from the ground up to share with you lot, so check it out if you’re interested!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1kBfpjve07Ewpg99t9wnydTGOcvG77uOd/view?usp=drivesdk
Be warned though, it’s a pretty long read so don’t force yourself if you get bored halfway through. If you do choose to go through it though, I do hope you enjoy the ideas me and Milky have come up with over the past few months.
And we ain’t at all done, just so you know
I’m interested in hearing your thoughts after reading it all, so do tell me what you think about it
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I like it.
I’m not the best at storytelling so I have no criticism but I like the idea.
Nice, and that’s cool, I don’t mind
I read it
It’s really good with the storyline and storytelling
Just a couple more tweaks and it will be at maximum perfection
What tweaks do you have in mind?
Just for a basic story, you should probably have a main villain, but this is also very good with the story of resources running out
This is the premise, so the villain won’t be appearing JUST yet
I’ll keep in touch
cool!
I finished reading, I had this one idea of technology being enhanced to the point were you can cross into other people’s dimensions. (Could be used in the future to recruit to fight the big buddy daddy)
The whole travelling to other universes thing isn’t something that would be utilised JUST yet, in fact it’s more likely that they’d stay away from it because of events that occurred 450,000 years ago
Oh that makes sense
But if it was a situation to were they need to travel would they do it?
That would require them to have the means to cross universes, and seeing that the Zenith Arrangement hasn’t been seen in 450,000 years with there being no known technology that let’s them travel across the multiverse, there’s not much of a choice here
Alright
Hi fag
Hey peggy boy
I’m not alone
Nor am I
Die
Your girlfriend isn’t your backbone
She’s my bad-bone tho
Ew