Action: 3/10
Alright movements, but so slow-paced and choppy. I can’t really feel the action and fighting in this. Speed it up and delete some middle frames.
General Animation: 2/10
Can’t really tell what’s going on because of the slowness, and it makes for a short and boring anim. The character animations are very lackluster as well, only one body part at a time getting any movement and each movement being full of frames.
Basic Story: 1/10
I can’t really tell what’s going on, it’s 30 seconds of a guy doing a flip onto what I want to say is an octopus? Ya gotta give us some context or a startup there homie
Overall: 2/10
Not the best, but it can be. Just practice, and you can become great.
Study some tutorials like the ones of Alan Becker and others:
it is here Part 2
Action: 3/10
Alright movements, but so slow-paced and choppy. I can’t really feel the action and fighting in this. Speed it up and delete some middle frames.
General Animation: 2/10
Can’t really tell what’s going on because of the slowness, and it makes for a short and boring anim. The character animations are very lackluster as well, only one body part at a time getting any movement and each movement being full of frames.
Basic Story: 1/10
I can’t really tell what’s going on, it’s 30 seconds of a guy doing a flip onto what I want to say is an octopus? Ya gotta give us some context or a startup there homie
Overall: 2/10
Not the best, but it can be. Just practice, and you can become great.
Study some tutorials like the ones of Alan Becker and others:
Just practice homie, you can become the best. My first anims were bad, but I practiced and now I’m (almost) good.
Good luck on future endeavors.
Sorry for the long criticism, I tend to do that on most animations I see.
I will
Thanks
and also I am doing this on the computer