Needs more anticipation and such consider that heās flinging a humanoid robot that probably weighs around 300lbs+
Heās practically skipping with it and albeit he may be strong it still needs more swoosh, anticipation as itās being pulled, the jump and then the swinging back motion with anticipation and finally the throw being the highest point in velocity as itās thrown.
Lore is one of the most fun things to do in writing. You really donāt know how fun it was to brainstorm the world and politics between Avalon and Caspia.
The throw seems a little messy
Needs more anticipation and such consider that heās flinging a humanoid robot that probably weighs around 300lbs+
Heās practically skipping with it and albeit he may be strong it still needs more swoosh, anticipation as itās being pulled, the jump and then the swinging back motion with anticipation and finally the throw being the highest point in velocity as itās thrown.
You rethink lore?
I literally changed lore for R. Buddi-
ā¦what?
Basically
It’s a fuckin’ hassle when changing lore especially for R. Buddi
Lore is one of the most fun things to do in writing. You really donāt know how fun it was to brainstorm the world and politics between Avalon and Caspia.