its got that charming simplicity to it but shows promise, as the animation is of course pretty basic and has areas of improvement, but the general flow of a quick military operation still has entertainment
also definitely try to get an app to post process the video, and add extra/better sounds, ambiance, and music
I agree with Ralph’s perspective. The scenes are notably refreshing. During dialogue the characters constantly were doing something, such as pulling out the clipboard or the cam movement.
For the 2 minutes we’ve seen a lot of different scenery/areas.
In the scene where the soldier is standing between the trees, you’ve placed a barely noticable car. This is detail a lot of new animators leave out making the scenery look empty.
On top of that it was really well paced. Not too quick where it becomes incomprehensible, but not too slow to fall asleep.
I loved that you’ve added sound to most movements that would create a sound. A wider variety of sounds would have topped it. But hey. using the sounds SN provides its totally fine too! Thats why they exist.
You’ve also managed to provide a military action that didn’t feel pointless.
Of course the animation itself has it flaws here and there. Mostly when it comes to momentum/flow. Stuttering. But you’ve got potential to make interesting well-paced action animation. So keep it up and keep practising
its got that charming simplicity to it but shows promise, as the animation is of course pretty basic and has areas of improvement, but the general flow of a quick military operation still has entertainment
also definitely try to get an app to post process the video, and add extra/better sounds, ambiance, and music
Thank you soo much for that comment
What app would you suggest?
Reminds me of my first post
I agree with Ralph’s perspective. The scenes are notably refreshing. During dialogue the characters constantly were doing something, such as pulling out the clipboard or the cam movement.
For the 2 minutes we’ve seen a lot of different scenery/areas.
In the scene where the soldier is standing between the trees, you’ve placed a barely noticable car. This is detail a lot of new animators leave out making the scenery look empty.
On top of that it was really well paced. Not too quick where it becomes incomprehensible, but not too slow to fall asleep.
I loved that you’ve added sound to most movements that would create a sound. A wider variety of sounds would have topped it. But hey. using the sounds SN provides its totally fine too! Thats why they exist.
You’ve also managed to provide a military action that didn’t feel pointless.
Of course the animation itself has it flaws here and there. Mostly when it comes to momentum/flow. Stuttering. But you’ve got potential to make interesting well-paced action animation. So keep it up and keep practising
that hitman style drop at 1:54
I agree too