now time to color the background YAY!!!!
here is the script in case you can’t read it:
frame 1:”I don’t know why the shelter hasn’t thrown you to the streets yet, but I know one thing….”
frame 2: you’re just a lost cause
i think your art is pretty good, to not be disingenuous, but you gotta work on the dialouge. its very forced edgy, it almost is begging to ask you to hate these people who have trapped her, rather than letting the feelings build naturally through both action and smoother dialouge. look into it some, and i think you can do it. keep working on your stuff, either way
its also kind of supposed to be racially motivated you see hellhounds are treated like animals because they are the lowest in hell’s hierarchy and can be treated however they want by other demons such as imps(imps are also lower class demons)
Replying to:Wannabe OutlawMy favorite part of Helluva Boss was that one episode where
beezlebub is having none of that she owns the shelters despite her looking similar to hellhounds. I’m pretty sure she uses the gluttony ring demons just to get high off of them being gluttonous
but you liked the uncolored version
Well i couldn’tsee the dialog
well at least this can’t harm my reputation as bad as drama
What drama
there is no drama I’m just saying a cringe comic can’t hurt my reputation as bad as drama can
I can’t see that gif how strange
Sorry I’ll stop with the supernatural gifs
I’m in a mood
Okay so am I not allowed to not like something that you don’t like?
I’m not bandwagoning you gigan. Believe it or not, I can actually change my mind.
Stop fucking assuming shit about me. It’s getting real old.
Actuallyim gonna not say anythingmore becauseim prollygonna get angryand say somethingi shouldnt..
Take care
Why the fuck are the spaces gone
Drama level of the day very high get your popcorn ready viewers
I hate popcorn so uh

i think your art is pretty good, to not be disingenuous, but you gotta work on the dialouge. its very forced edgy, it almost is begging to ask you to hate these people who have trapped her, rather than letting the feelings build naturally through both action and smoother dialouge. look into it some, and i think you can do it. keep working on your stuff, either way
thanks
its also kind of supposed to be racially motivated you see hellhounds are treated like animals because they are the lowest in hell’s hierarchy and can be treated however they want by other demons such as imps(imps are also lower class demons)
My favorite part of Helluva Boss was that one episode where they started the Hellhound’s Rights Movement.
beezlebub is having none of that she owns the shelters despite her looking similar to hellhounds. I’m pretty sure she uses the gluttony ring demons just to get high off of them being gluttonous