I feel like her hoodie feel a little suctioned around the breasts for a presumably baggy and not sunctioned hoody (judging by the arms)
that’s less design and more style, but personally I would try to look at reference images to recreate it, usually there’s not that under line sorta thing under the breast or some such, words be hard, hopefully I make some sense

Anyway, I quite like it so far besides that rather minor tidbit