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    RYOMEN SUKUNA 2025-09-18 23:55:24 UTC

    hey can I have help for the mc for my story his name is katsuki, the Brute with a Dragon’s Soul
    Likes: Flamboyant entrances, theatrical poses, the smell of fresh rain, the unique purity of an Oni he’s about to exorcise, Maki’s cooking, the sound of an honest fight.
    Dislikes: subtlety, being seen without his bandana, lies, the sterile atmosphere of the Ministry of Spirits, the oppressive traditions of the clans.
    Humor: Delivered with a complete lack of self-awareness and social understanding. He perceives emotions as abstract smells and makes brutally honest observations that come off as strangely comedic.
    Design: Lean, 6-foot-tall figure with immense muscle mass, Tengen-inspired flamboyance, Sanemi-like scars, red-eyed Six Eyes, teen Geto bun with red streak, Katana Man-style shirt and pants, Harley boots, grappling cables.
    Titan Form: Armored Oni Slayer, grotesque and powerful, activated by red lightning and shedding human skin.
    Moveset: grappling cables(a grappling hook built into his forearms that tea objects towards him and is used for jarring movement), Destructive Death (Compass Needle, Annihilation Style, Disorder, Eight-Layered Demon Core, Final Form: Chaotic crimson death).

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    • So much of this is just specific hoobagabba that only you really understand.

      If you want to improve your writing, maybe begin with some context or better yet, the means to apply some. Make like a little story or something that intertwines these story pieces so it actually makes sense.

      2025-09-19 00:02:12 UTC 9
      • Replying to: Tastylemon16So much of this is just specific hoobagabba that only you re

        Trust the British guy here. They have better English than us Americans haha.

        2025-09-19 00:09:54 UTC 2
    • hey
      uh
      I could help ya

      2025-09-19 00:08:00 UTC 1
    • You didnt read the whole pinned post.
      Also what Lemon said, this is 90% mumbo jumbo that only you would understand and have the knowledge of.

      2025-09-19 00:11:47 UTC 7
      • Replying to: 🎃🍂ThoughtsOfHalloween🍂🎃You didnt read the whole pinned post. Also what Lemon said,

        oni are demons and I just need advice

        2025-09-19 00:22:10 UTC 1
      • Replying to: 🎃🍂ThoughtsOfHalloween🍂🎃You didnt read the whole pinned post. Also what Lemon said,

        and if you want background here feel free to skip this tough I have had this character for a year
        Core Arc: From Shackled Monster to Free Dragon
        Katsuki’s character arc is a subversion of the typical shounen protagonist. Born with immense, destructive power and a flamboyant personality, he seems destined for glory. However, his life is a paradox: while possessing the ultimate ocular ability in the Six Eyes, it was intentionally suppressed by his Hashirama clan to prevent his monstrous nature from unleashing Asura. This left him with a demonic, red-hued Six Eyes that gave him unparalleled perception but no ability to sense spiritual pressure, making him a terrifyingly efficient killing machine with a profound disconnect from the spiritual world and the emotional weight of his actions. His quest for freedom and change is a deeply personal one, a rebellion against the very forces that shaped him into a monster.
        Origins and Trauma
        Katsuki was groomed from birth to be a vessel for the Hashirama clan, a clan founded to front Asura. This upbringing instilled a cold, brutal efficiency in him. The Hashirama clan sabotaged his Six Eyes, leaving him with immense power and heightened senses but no ability to perceive spiritual pressure. This made him a powerful but psychologically unstable monster. His flamboyant personality is a coping mechanism, a way to project an image of unshakeable confidence to hide his inner turmoil. The constant “aura farms” and violent confrontations further hardened his exterior, leaving him covered in the Sanemi-like scars of his traumatic past.
        Relationships and Obsessions
        Maki: Katsuki sees Maki as his ideal, a beacon of perfection despite her perverted tendencies. He is fiercely loyal to her, but his inability to understand romantic love leaves him confused by her constant proposals. He finds her perverted comments confusing and embarrassing, but her loyalty and strength are a constant in his chaotic life. He loves the red streak she weaves into his hair, a sign of her care and a rare touch of humanity in his monstrous existence.
        Killua: Katsuki’s relationship with Killua is a complex rivalry rooted in a clash of ideologies. Katsuki’s raw, instinctual approach to combat clashes with Killua’s meticulous, strategic mindset. Killua resents Katsuki’s monstrous nature, and Katsuki finds Killua’s rigid logic predictable and boring. Their rivalry is a core element of the story, with each pushing the other to their limits.
        The World: Katsuki’s worldview is defined by his desire for freedom. He sees the exorcist college, the Ministry, and the clans as a system of oppression and control. He longs to break free from these shackles and achieve a state of true, untethered freedom, a goal embodied by his dream of becoming the Dragon Lord.

        2025-09-19 00:27:33 UTC 1
        • Replying to: RYOMEN SUKUNAand if you want background here feel free to skip this tough

          idk about thoughts
          but to me
          It kinda seems like your guy is really fleshed out already

          2025-09-19 00:31:22 UTC 1
          • Replying to: ULTIMUS482 (more bisexual)idk about thoughts but to me It kinda seems like your guy is

            I know but is he over powerd

            2025-09-19 00:33:33 UTC 1